Loosing The Light

You just crawled inside all of our brains with this write, Damian.
I love it.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. Sorry about that, I have that kinda effect sometimes. lol. I'm glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.

Damian

 

Without protecting the light, were faced with blinding lies & deceit. Great idea and a powerful message of the ongoing issues we all face here. Small problems and the larger ones, the majority lie.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Honored to make your RL. Glad you connected with the write, brother. I concur with your assessment. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Superbly executed Damian ❤️

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Honored to make your RL. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Excellent... really enjoyed this one...

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. Honored to make your RL. I'm glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.

Damian

We are all of us equal parts light & dark. It's how we see textures & shapes around us. The trick is not letting one overtake the other...no small feat. When the light dims it's so hard to boost the flame again. It's like a dance...delicate footing. Another brilliant musing, Damian. I'm taking this one home with me

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Honored to make your RL. I concur with your assessment, it is a dance indeed. Sometimes it's a battle, it can get dark sometimes. Enjoyed your commentary, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian    

Realizing lies as darkness takes a synesthetic sensitivity.

Well done, sir, well done!  

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, MS. I concur, my friend. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.

Damian

"Flaming tongues searing paper flesh
How long till this soul bares the mark?"

Damian that's deep. Like the piece

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Honored to make your RL. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. It is profound, sometimes I just go where the voice leads. Appreciate you.

Damian

'' These lies are old but the pain is fresh ''
Damn!!..

Stripping off the blinders...bearing the truth...

Much respect

Naaj

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. I liked that line as well. Glad you connected with the write, brother. Much respect. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is awesome.  Base foundation of concrete display.  Succinct but assuredly defined in emotion and character.  Great mix of rhythm, imagination, direction, form, and heart.  The 2nd and 3rd stanzas come to life with the excitement of the poem, at least to me.  I'm not going to tell you anything here that you don't know, so I'll just say thanks for taking the time to write and share in such inspiration.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. I'm glad you connected with the write. Always enjoy your analysis, my friend. Spot on. Appreciate you.

Damian  

"These lies are old but the pain is fresh" > this line hits home.

You really went deep with this one, my friend. There's no light without darkness, though sometimes I wish the dark would back off, even if it's just for a while. Love the Jim Morrison quote, in fact: it's my favorite 🖤

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Honored to make your RL. I loved that line as well. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Cool to know that "The Movie" is your favorite from Morrison. Mine is "Severed Garden Adagio." Appreciate you.

Damian