Arcadia

Could visualise the couple enjoying the Sunday morning in bed.

A beautiful image, indeed.  Thank you so much for reading 💜

Succinctly delectable tell of a moment's glory. Untetherings are such things of beauty. Best of luck with the comp. 🌼

They so very much are.  Thank you so much for reading 💜

Tender and seductive. Good luck

Thank you so much! 💜

Thank you so much ☺️ 💜

Lovely

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Yes yes yes.....this is very good and gets better each time I read it.

Thank you so much 💜

A sensual and evocative passage that explores the intimacy and passion of a romantic encounter. The language is rich and descriptive, with vivid imagery that conjures a sense of warmth, comfort, and desire.

The use of words like "ravishing," "concupiscent," and "rapture" creates a lush, indulgent atmosphere, while the focus on the tactile sensations and emotional connection between the two individuals adds depth and intimacy to the scene.


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I see you and love your name. Now I love the rapture of your poem

Really fantastic work here!

Incredible writing.

"she comes untethered" has enough of that inflection to know just how beautiful and power this rapture can be.
Great work.

Winter just got warmer. What a romantic jewel.

Truly beautiful. A breathtaking symphony of passion and intimacy. I was pulled into every word, saw it, felt it... It's just so romantic and erotic, that combination can be so difficult to achieve and yet you did it so seamlessly here.