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Love You Up
I want to run my tongue
along every scar
in your gorgeous mind
and on your beautiful body
lick the pain that pours
from your pores
as you pour out your soul to me
give me every drop
of your anguished anger
your tormented troubles
your melancholy madness
your irritated insanity
so I can swallow what's
on the menu of your need
and give you the love
you deserve
along every scar
in your gorgeous mind
and on your beautiful body
lick the pain that pours
from your pores
as you pour out your soul to me
give me every drop
of your anguished anger
your tormented troubles
your melancholy madness
your irritated insanity
so I can swallow what's
on the menu of your need
and give you the love
you deserve
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Re. Love You Up
31st Dec 2024 00:02am
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31st Dec 2024 00:05am
Re. Love You Up
31st Dec 2024 1:33am
you wouldn't like the taste of my scarred mind
but the thought is beautiful
but the thought is beautiful
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Re. Love You Up
31st Dec 2024 2:33am
Dear M,
Oooffffaaahhh! I dig the sensuality of this write. The appreciation of the other person in this piece is intense and sizzling. I enjoyed the formatting in this as well. Great write. H🌷
Oooffffaaahhh! I dig the sensuality of this write. The appreciation of the other person in this piece is intense and sizzling. I enjoyed the formatting in this as well. Great write. H🌷
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Re. Love You Up
31st Dec 2024 3:17am
Steamy write, Mary. Into the list it belongs. I need a cigarette after reading this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re. Love You Up
31st Dec 2024 2:38pm
Intense ,passionate poem ,dear Mary❤️
Gorgeous pic❣️
Wish you a very happy new year ✨
Gorgeous pic❣️
Wish you a very happy new year ✨
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