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Don't let time fool you
Another night and all I can do is sit & be silent
Silence has become my life filter
I figure if you can't deal with them, then deal with yourself
If you can't deal with yourself, then do the best you can
Not to let time fool you into doing something stupid
Like living forever
Like giving in and stopping your heart
Like going to them and looking for some part of yourself
I can tell you
It doesn't exist
Silence has become my life filter
I figure if you can't deal with them, then deal with yourself
If you can't deal with yourself, then do the best you can
Not to let time fool you into doing something stupid
Like living forever
Like giving in and stopping your heart
Like going to them and looking for some part of yourself
I can tell you
It doesn't exist
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Re. Don't let time fool you
29th Dec 2024 1:47pm
That seems grim we can't even find a piece of ourselves.
Thought provoking.
Thought provoking.
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Re. Don't let time fool you
29th Dec 2024 6:30pm
time is a currency a notion .. man made one. an inorganic hell.. for which why should one’s self ₹ soul be spent be in submission.. wow! You tell this powerfully philosophically n such spiritualistic tones too resurface from the converse of it all you say sharp .. but hits hard with it’s sadness n silence .. well written Keith xx
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29th Dec 2024 6:43pm
Thanks Uma. I appreciate your breakdown and observation on this piece. xo
Re. Don't let time fool you
29th Dec 2024 11:29pm
hello dearest Keith I may not live forever but I'll make a mark I believe this is very good ❤️
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Re. Don't let time fool you
30th Dec 2024 4:55am
Introspection, is it's own rabbit hole, maybe even it's own area code. Never knowing what we'll find, I always uncover something new. I understand it all to well. Phenomenal write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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30th Dec 2024 11:43am
Time is a strange thing. Can't let it get to you. It can become deadly even when you least expect it to be. Thanks Damien.
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