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New Beginnings
It has been so long
Since we have been alone
It brings back memories
Of you and I
Sweet kisses, I miss
In the moonlight
Tender touches, I reminisce
Of you and I
You look so good
I never understood
Why did it have to end
Tell me why
You strum my body
Like a finely tuned guitar
Creating melodies
Rivaling symphonies
I will not deny
Let's start a new
You and I
This time, there will be no end
My lover and friend
Since we have been alone
It brings back memories
Of you and I
Sweet kisses, I miss
In the moonlight
Tender touches, I reminisce
Of you and I
You look so good
I never understood
Why did it have to end
Tell me why
You strum my body
Like a finely tuned guitar
Creating melodies
Rivaling symphonies
I will not deny
Let's start a new
You and I
This time, there will be no end
My lover and friend
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Re. New Beginnings
29th Dec 2024 00:05am
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Re. New Beginnings
29th Dec 2024 00:08am
This is so good, Fia! To me it feels like reminisces of carefree young love in the summer heat by the river. 😊🎸
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Re. New Beginnings
29th Dec 2024 1:21am
This is what I've been saying for awhile now it's never over if the truth is the heart 💕 is willing to be able to do that what is necessary to have something that will always be needed for a righteous relationship ❤️🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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29th Dec 2024 1:22am
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29th Dec 2024 1:28am
Thanks for sharing this story of the deepness of what was meant to be able to share and build a strong relationship 💕💓🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re. New Beginnings
29th Dec 2024 3:44am
Beautifully written, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Brilliantly executed, my friend. My favorite verse was:
"You strum my body
Like a finely tuned guitar
Creating melodies
Rivaling symphonies
I will not deny"
You know I love musical references. Incredible read. Appreciate you.
Damian
"You strum my body
Like a finely tuned guitar
Creating melodies
Rivaling symphonies
I will not deny"
You know I love musical references. Incredible read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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