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will you ever satisfy my lust?
my white heat
hung on the wall
slipped in the bathroom
spread on the grass
slept on the bed
flowed through the window pane
get absorbed in the flowers
when
when
when
i heard you playing the saxophone
amidst the colorful lights,
when i kissed
the emerging contours of your body
with frozen fish of my eyes,
when i felt your dry lips
defined by sensuality
on my body,
when my dirty mind imagined,
trying to pull your stiff cock
dangling between your legs
to your knees...
hung on the wall
slipped in the bathroom
spread on the grass
slept on the bed
flowed through the window pane
get absorbed in the flowers
when
when
when
i heard you playing the saxophone
amidst the colorful lights,
when i kissed
the emerging contours of your body
with frozen fish of my eyes,
when i felt your dry lips
defined by sensuality
on my body,
when my dirty mind imagined,
trying to pull your stiff cock
dangling between your legs
to your knees...
Published 20th Dec 2024
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20th Dec 2024 11:46am
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20th Dec 2024 12:00pm
Liked the variety of positions the narrator seems to have tried:
my white heat
hung on the wall
slipped in the bathroom
spread on the grass
slept on the bed
my white heat
hung on the wall
slipped in the bathroom
spread on the grass
slept on the bed
20th Dec 2024 1:57pm
20th Dec 2024 7:19pm
You did what good poets do.Created images in the readers mind using words.
'trying to pull your stiff cock
dangling between your legs'
Brilliant.
'trying to pull your stiff cock
dangling between your legs'
Brilliant.
21st Dec 2024 1:30am
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30th Dec 2024 4:56am
That is a large dangling cock! Did he faint from lack of blood to his brain when it became erect?
30th Dec 2024 5:52am
