Excursions

Very nice rhythm and flow to this. Like the end with the search 😊

Tempting, isn't it? 😉

Superbly done Billy ♥️

Thank you, Pete. You make me smile! Remember, it wasn't that kind of cruise. Don't incriminate yourself now, lol! 😉

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Good Write Billy

Bat

I really appreciate your read of this, Bat & the powerful feedback too. Many thanks. 😊

I raise my glass to you, Dragonblood. Thanks for the feedback. 🍷

You’ve captured LDF’s spirit, Billy.
Well done :)

Thank you Mary for giving your thoughts on this. It came about when a DU competition was held back in September 2024, called, Imitation Is The Sincerest Form Of Battery. I wrote about two poets for it but never submitted either, until now. This can be seen as a tribute but also a bit of fun. I had fun writing both, as it happens! 😊

Ooh…
Now I wanna know who the other poet was, lol.

"Wake Me Up When September Ends"!
You no longer have to pretend.  :P

9/23! Never forget lol 😆

Speaks for itself, with your guidance, sir. Your wit is unrivalled ya know. Even in the cuteness of it, there is the subliminal signs of a well orchestrated mind. Yours!

Very kind of you to say, Styx. Soon I will be calling you Sty, I feel, which is really informal, lol. I feel both lifted & humbled by such a nice comment. Thank you, sir. 🤗🙏

Ohhhh to get a way on a perfect excursion and be at peace. Far away from the loudness of the world.

I wouldn't say no to that either, Libra. Thanks for commenting. 😊

That was serenity.  I felt like I was skydiving with a wicked ocean view.

LJ

Thank you, LJ. Skydiving? Even with a drink in your hand? That's impressive... like you! Lol, I can see that now. The view is rather high, you're right! 🤣

What a delightful and uplifting poem..

You're very kind, sir. Thank you. I'm glad it conveyed that vibe for you. 🤗