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Excursions
Life's excursion
The ocean wave
Some perversion...
Another day!
The wind, it calls
When ink runs dry
And I'm drifting
But flying high
I know my place
When lost at sea
It could be anywhere
Or Tennessee!
Don't tie me up
Or put me down
I'm just not ready
To be your clown!
Onwards I travel
Sweetly sublime
Until I find...
The perfect rhyme
The ocean wave
Some perversion...
Another day!
The wind, it calls
When ink runs dry
And I'm drifting
But flying high
I know my place
When lost at sea
It could be anywhere
Or Tennessee!
Don't tie me up
Or put me down
I'm just not ready
To be your clown!
Onwards I travel
Sweetly sublime
Until I find...
The perfect rhyme
Author's Note
Speaks for itself. 🍾😊🛳
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9th Dec 2024 9:54pm
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9th Dec 2024 11:22pm
Thank you, Pete. You make me smile! Remember, it wasn't that kind of cruise. Don't incriminate yourself now, lol! 😉
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10th Dec 2024 1:27am
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10th Dec 2024 1:39am
I really appreciate your read of this, Bat & the powerful feedback too. Many thanks. 😊
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Anonymous
10th Dec 2024 3:17am
An enjoyable read, Billy. :)
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10th Dec 2024 3:18am
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10th Dec 2024 8:55pm
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10th Dec 2024 9:23pm
Thank you Mary for giving your thoughts on this. It came about when a DU competition was held back in September 2024, called, Imitation Is The Sincerest Form Of Battery. I wrote about two poets for it but never submitted either, until now. This can be seen as a tribute but also a bit of fun. I had fun writing both, as it happens! 😊
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10th Dec 2024 9:34pm
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20th Dec 2024 3:46pm
"Wake Me Up When September Ends"!
You no longer have to pretend. :P
9/23! Never forget lol 😆
You no longer have to pretend. :P
9/23! Never forget lol 😆
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28th Dec 2024 4:15pm
Speaks for itself, with your guidance, sir. Your wit is unrivalled ya know. Even in the cuteness of it, there is the subliminal signs of a well orchestrated mind. Yours!
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28th Dec 2024 4:50pm
Very kind of you to say, Styx. Soon I will be calling you Sty, I feel, which is really informal, lol. I feel both lifted & humbled by such a nice comment. Thank you, sir. 🤗🙏
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Yesterday 2:53am
Ohhhh to get a way on a perfect excursion and be at peace. Far away from the loudness of the world.
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Yesterday 2:55am