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I have no doubt he loves and desires me,
Or that his words ignite fires within my being.
A burning yet tender lust.
To be in possession of a silent hunger you must.
Our bodies colliding, the sweet violence to it.
Jealousy fails to exist or does it?
Just questioning eyes.
Lips answering lies.
Thoughts evaporate before they create a line.
Not like our love.
Your love never.
Fails to exist.
Handcuff burns on my wrist.
Or that his words ignite fires within my being.
A burning yet tender lust.
To be in possession of a silent hunger you must.
Our bodies colliding, the sweet violence to it.
Jealousy fails to exist or does it?
Just questioning eyes.
Lips answering lies.
Thoughts evaporate before they create a line.
Not like our love.
Your love never.
Fails to exist.
Handcuff burns on my wrist.
Author's Note
The first line was texted to me. A fetus of words grew
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7th Dec 2024 8:14pm
I love how you said a fetus of words grew. That's intense. Now the poem very yummy;))
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7th Dec 2024 10:32pm
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8th Dec 2024 4:04am
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You always come through with a blend of
emotional intensity, mental complexity and poetic dexterity...
much respect
Naaj
emotional intensity, mental complexity and poetic dexterity...
much respect
Naaj
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8th Dec 2024 10:28am
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8th Dec 2024 12:52pm
What one line can create... I love that's a bit cryptic - and intense.
Amazing piece of ink, dear Debbie, love this one 💕
Amazing piece of ink, dear Debbie, love this one 💕
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8th Dec 2024 2:00pm
Hi. I felt that line was juxtaposed to the rest of the poem.
A little random dark pleasure. Thank you so much for lovely comments.
A little random dark pleasure. Thank you so much for lovely comments.
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9th Dec 2024 9:50pm
Another brilliant piece only you can achieve here. Nice work Debbie.
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15th Dec 2024 1:05am
oOOooOoO! I likee.
The absolute certainty that THIS love was different.
The hesitation.
The visceral show it was not different
And the handcuffs locking the narrator in to the same fucking shit.
DAAAAMMNNN.
Great work.
The absolute certainty that THIS love was different.
The hesitation.
The visceral show it was not different
And the handcuffs locking the narrator in to the same fucking shit.
DAAAAMMNNN.
Great work.
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15th Dec 2024 11:45am
I like seeing the poem through your eyes. Thanks so much for feedback,
I'm glad you liked it. 🖤
I'm glad you liked it. 🖤