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Time Out Of Mind
In that city where you live
Maybe not public display
Still would love to take
Anytime night or day
In the hue of sunrise
Awake when I am at full mast
Hope it is sufficient
For I think I can last
Just enough with a bit more play
You moan out my name
Quiver as you cum
What it is not hard to explain
Built up with our exchanges
Legs, hips, lips and hands
Mutual pleasure
That is what the scene demands
As if an volcanic eruption started
With the fire we share
Now to be quenched in met bodies
To each other we are bare
As the sun had made it's way
To the delights of the night
Embrace me once more
Let me just hold you tight
Maybe not public display
Still would love to take
Anytime night or day
In the hue of sunrise
Awake when I am at full mast
Hope it is sufficient
For I think I can last
Just enough with a bit more play
You moan out my name
Quiver as you cum
What it is not hard to explain
Built up with our exchanges
Legs, hips, lips and hands
Mutual pleasure
That is what the scene demands
As if an volcanic eruption started
With the fire we share
Now to be quenched in met bodies
To each other we are bare
As the sun had made it's way
To the delights of the night
Embrace me once more
Let me just hold you tight
Published 21st May 2012
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21st May 2012 2:23pm
Beautiful love poem.
"As the sun had made it's way
To the delights of the night
Embrace me once more
Let me just hold you tight"
this stanza convey nice images
"As the sun had made it's way
To the delights of the night
Embrace me once more
Let me just hold you tight"
this stanza convey nice images
21st May 2012 2:43pm
Thanks...I am not sure words can do it, but many of Carlos Santana's guitar solos, especially on the older stuff bring to mind all kinds of reminders of the natural beauty around us.
22nd May 2012 9:38am
22nd May 2012 4:47pm
Thanks for the comment, especially after that silly argument/discussion about erotic poems a few days ago!
22nd May 2012 4:43pm
22nd May 2012 4:49pm
Umm thanks...not sure I am really aware of any particular style when writing but I appreciate your comment!
22nd May 2012 5:05pm
What's up Jazz....very good, I always write about hot crazy sex, but after reading your style really got me thinking.....making love is always so much better
23rd May 2012 1:34am
What's up? Hard to answer in a nutshell, but basically I am dealing with allergies that have my ears stopped up!
I would like to think you can have both---if they are distinct, maybe alternate? Even with the same partner there are so many variables you can "play" with. But that is just me...
I would like to think you can have both---if they are distinct, maybe alternate? Even with the same partner there are so many variables you can "play" with. But that is just me...
25th May 2012 10:27am
25th May 2012 10:43am
Thanks...I guess if you write enough every now and then you will get it right!
