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MAKING LOVE UNDER THE SHOWER

Under the shower we make love.  
Its water cascades from above,  
soaking our conjoined bodies' skins.  
My calves are caressed by your shins.
 
Our bodies, soapily sliding,  
meeting in the urgent riding  
of your parted thighs on my own,  
my hands under your rear your throne.  
 
Hidden behind its drawn curtain  
as we thrust to climax certain,
the water's pour muffles our moans  
to slamming of our pelvic bones.  

The shower's side screen steaming up  
as if blushing to see us 'tup'
in such uninhibited way
under mutual desires' sway.
 
Our appetites undiminished,  
we come - but we are not finished.  
We dry each other, parts re-stir,  
to take, in bedroom, things further.
Written by Solomon_Song
Published | Edited 6th Dec 2024
Author's Note
Inspired by the shower sex scene in Sharedjehan's The Long Ride.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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