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Deal Meal

Make it a meal
Seems like a deal
More for less reel
Has squeak appeal
Let's just reveal
What's under the seal
Like banana peel
Spent how you'll feel

The extra you got
Is just plain rot
Sugar/starch lot
Was tossed in a pot
Pushed through a slot
Tied in a knot
Sold with a plot
Gourmet it's not

What's served is all air

Puffed magic prepare
Exaggerate's care
Extremed ordinaire
Sold as good food ware
So bad for health fare
So just you beware
Best before
Dare

Damn
Some poems have a form
More X is a storm
While Y to conform
Like fast food perform
I'll end with a worm
Written by rickthepoetwarrior
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Author's Note
From my book of observations of the Middle Class.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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