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Keith (Vision_of_insanity)
Not afraid to cut people with his ink
Often saying the quiet part out loud
Throwing barbs from the kitchen sink
He knows how to provoke the proud
Underneath the darkness there is light
Hidden in metaphor or lurking in humor
Doesn’t pull punches or throw the fight
A warning to the fainthearted consumer
Sticks and stones often break bones
While words bring out honest results
So put down the fucking smartphones
He’s taking down cults and weak adults
His visions are packed full of insanity
It’s just the world as his eyes see it
I’m not gonna lie there will be profanity
He’s a smooth poet with endless grit
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Often saying the quiet part out loud
Throwing barbs from the kitchen sink
He knows how to provoke the proud
Underneath the darkness there is light
Hidden in metaphor or lurking in humor
Doesn’t pull punches or throw the fight
A warning to the fainthearted consumer
Sticks and stones often break bones
While words bring out honest results
So put down the fucking smartphones
He’s taking down cults and weak adults
His visions are packed full of insanity
It’s just the world as his eyes see it
I’m not gonna lie there will be profanity
He’s a smooth poet with endless grit
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Published 29th Nov 2024
Author's Note
For the Living Memorial competition. This one is dedicated to, Keith. A talented writer with a lot of grit. He's not afraid to go there, that place we've all been, he's just not afraid to say the quiet part out loud. I respect him a great deal. I admire his fearlessness, he goes places I don't even dare. Appreciate you, brother.
- Damian DeadLove
" Out on the road, paint this toll
Make me whole, set the stage
Fill it with anger, fill it with rage
No I don't know what's today
I know it falls in the year of decay."
- Bobby "Blitz" Ellsworth
- Damian DeadLove
" Out on the road, paint this toll
Make me whole, set the stage
Fill it with anger, fill it with rage
No I don't know what's today
I know it falls in the year of decay."
- Bobby "Blitz" Ellsworth
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29th Nov 2024 6:44am
30th Nov 2024 5:00am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. Honored to make your RL. Glad you liked the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
29th Nov 2024 10:53am
30th Nov 2024 5:06am
Thanks so much for reading and kind words, Pete. I'll need the luck, there is some fierce competition for sure. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
29th Nov 2024 12:00pm
Damian..this was unbelievable! I have nothing to say except Thank you! I'm speechless. You captivated me & my stories with such accuracy and precision. A thousand thanks to you. I appreciate you. Best of luck in the competition.
30th Nov 2024 5:15am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Honored to make your RL. I'm glad you liked it, brother. I'm glad you approve. I'll need the luck, there is some fierce competition for sure. I wouldn't expect anything less. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
29th Nov 2024 12:10pm
Excellent tribute, Damian! I haven't really connected with VoI, but this is a beautiful way to honor his presence here at DU! Thanks for your entry!
30th Nov 2024 5:22am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. I'm glad you liked the write. I think this competition was the catalyst for poets/poetesses to convey support and appreciation for one another, while honoring those who've crossed over. It's been quite amazing how the community has responded with such passionate writes. Thank you for starting this competition to honor creative writing, and those who engage in it. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
30th Nov 2024 3:52am
30th Nov 2024 5:28am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Glad you liked the write. I'm so thankful for all the poets/poetesses that are in my life. Someone very wise said "Silent talent should never be." I agree with that wholeheartedly my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
30th Nov 2024 5:06am
30th Nov 2024 5:30am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind gesture, ML. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
30th Nov 2024 5:31am
30th Nov 2024 1:16pm
What a beautiful tribute. It's not easy to capture someone's essence, but you did a great job.
"His visions are packed full of insanity" > so very clever :-) I appreciate you.
"His visions are packed full of insanity" > so very clever :-) I appreciate you.
1st Dec 2024 3:39am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Well I try. lol. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
1st Dec 2024 4:03pm
The gift of being brutally honest is a fierce one. Most people are afraid to rock the boat so they soft-sole around issues. Fantastic tribute to a truth speaker!
2nd Dec 2024 3:19am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. I'm glad you liked the write. I agree with you totally, my friend. They are a fierce breed. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
