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21st Century Love
Bemuse and choose a use refused.
Entombed to lose is Yule that groups.
What brood of shrews askew the broom.
Abuses pulled exhuming ghouls.
Our nooses due attuned Azul.
Congruent cupid doom deluge.
Exclusive ruse bejeweled approved.
Such runes confuse construing cute.
Reproved dispute when lucid lewd.
Inhuman rules reduce their views.
Concluding cruelty cubed computes.
Assuming Zule has Zues' 'ludes.
Presumable collusion grew.
Obtrusion knew amusement prude.
Intruding truth gave news commune.
Accusing crews can clue acute.
Immutable tomfool unsuits.
Affluence flew from few like feud.
Seducing slew onto delude.
Removed allusions tooling troops.
How screws come through as you do too.
I knew her spoon recruits thy youth.
Hence junior soon meant music moved.
This bluesy moon rose juicy full.
In June shall bloom effusion zoomed.
Inclusion drew while womb gives hue.
Infusing fruit immune on looms.
Secluded spool weaves future two.
It's beautiful if cues deduced.
Excusable reclusion loosed.
Unto imputing pews impugns.
Anew refuels my tune for loops.
Entombed to lose is Yule that groups.
What brood of shrews askew the broom.
Abuses pulled exhuming ghouls.
Our nooses due attuned Azul.
Congruent cupid doom deluge.
Exclusive ruse bejeweled approved.
Such runes confuse construing cute.
Reproved dispute when lucid lewd.
Inhuman rules reduce their views.
Concluding cruelty cubed computes.
Assuming Zule has Zues' 'ludes.
Presumable collusion grew.
Obtrusion knew amusement prude.
Intruding truth gave news commune.
Accusing crews can clue acute.
Immutable tomfool unsuits.
Affluence flew from few like feud.
Seducing slew onto delude.
Removed allusions tooling troops.
How screws come through as you do too.
I knew her spoon recruits thy youth.
Hence junior soon meant music moved.
This bluesy moon rose juicy full.
In June shall bloom effusion zoomed.
Inclusion drew while womb gives hue.
Infusing fruit immune on looms.
Secluded spool weaves future two.
It's beautiful if cues deduced.
Excusable reclusion loosed.
Unto imputing pews impugns.
Anew refuels my tune for loops.
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Author's Note
Just an exercise in an exhausting rhyme scheme and flow that I tried to tell a love story in, as well as capture some of the immorality in the world. This took quite a bit of effort, and I assume it could always be altered or edited, but I hope you enjoy!
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Today 7:20am
Youre kinda cryptic and i like that.
I spend a lot of time looking up words unfamiliar or otherwise to make sure I'm not missing a hidden meaning.
I spend a lot of time looking up words unfamiliar or otherwise to make sure I'm not missing a hidden meaning.
Today 7:55am
Yeah, it is rather wordy and lengthy. That comes from the discipline of exercising such rhyme scheme. I realize this is difficult to decipher, and I suppose it's meant to be that way. I suppose all of the tests, trials, and adversity lead up to the acceptance of love in this. The protagonist can sort of be the narrator, as well as vicariously relatable in others, knowing the mess that's out there in the world scene (at least the first few stanzas). The last part is kind of hard to relate, but it's from experience. Anyway, thanks for checking it out.
