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Breathless (2024)

sometimes hovering overhead -
no more breathing in -
we're the ones who after death
awaken to begin

total transformation
from who we were before
by feeling the sensation
of forever more

slipping through the universe
in a flash, a blink
for a moment to be immersed
in where we are synced

spiraling, revolving
drums beating as we spin
attuned to what's evolving
in wherever we begin

hovering overhead
as we again begin
to transform from being dead
to again breathe in...
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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