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Dark World Within
a fate indescribable in a world in ruins
silence echoes where laughter once peals
grey skies over chaos remnants
in slumbering sleep the world that was
in cities of wandering ghosts
shrouded in clouds and memories
lost as in roads overgrown
nature return in its natural claims
Vibrant gardens replaced by despair
birds song now brittle in decay
seeds of discontent sowed in pathment cracks
roving around without feathers
the night is pierced by no stars
not aglow within ashes
whispers in a world reborn
beneath the ash and the dust
silence echoes where laughter once peals
grey skies over chaos remnants
in slumbering sleep the world that was
in cities of wandering ghosts
shrouded in clouds and memories
lost as in roads overgrown
nature return in its natural claims
Vibrant gardens replaced by despair
birds song now brittle in decay
seeds of discontent sowed in pathment cracks
roving around without feathers
the night is pierced by no stars
not aglow within ashes
whispers in a world reborn
beneath the ash and the dust
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Dreams and Nightmares
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Re. Dark World Within
12th Nov 2024 2:26pm
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12th Nov 2024 9:19pm
Hi dear Crimsin thank you for your kind comments. Always appreciate your support 🌹
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12th Nov 2024 3:56pm
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12th Nov 2024 9:21pm
Thank you Ahavati for reading and commenting. Sometimes I imagine depression to be like that. 🌹
Re. Dark World Within
13th Nov 2024 7:39pm
Even the dark world you beautify and mystify in the magic of your poetry and choice of picture! So enchanting! A pleasure to read you dear Grace.. God bless you.
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13th Nov 2024 9:40pm
Thank you dear Besma for dropping by and reading 🌹always so kind in your comments 😊be blessed always.
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Re. Dark World Within
16th Nov 2024 5:59pm
Nightmares and dreams indeed.
There is a touch of magical surrealism weaving throughout the piece, encompassing emotion and curiosity.
Great stuff.
There is a touch of magical surrealism weaving throughout the piece, encompassing emotion and curiosity.
Great stuff.
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16th Nov 2024 6:46pm
Thank you Wally for reading and commenting. Dreams can be a great source of inspiration 😊☺️
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19th Nov 2024 1:04am
I've got a few of the latter I still hold onto the husks of, regardless-
absofruitly, I wish you well
absofruitly, I wish you well
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