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Melange of Sunset’s Colors
Come quickly, my love; meet me here
in this hushed and finite space
where the sinking sun meets the rising moon
to exchange possession of the evening sky;
lay with me, tangled against the cooling earth,
limbs entwined in healing configurations;
feel my song upon you, a rhythmic devotion
deep within my warm and welcome breast;
let the melange of sunset’s colors soothe us
before we willfully surrender to the night
Published 8th Nov 2024
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8th Nov 2024 3:05am
Between the picture and the poem, this is romantic as hell.
Awesome use of language and images create the perfect scene.
Well done.
Awesome use of language and images create the perfect scene.
Well done.
8th Nov 2024 11:35am
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10th Nov 2024 1:56am
Dear L,
I enjoyed this piece. It felt like i was being called into the great beyond where safety and love were waiting to soothe all my hurts. Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed this piece. It felt like i was being called into the great beyond where safety and love were waiting to soothe all my hurts. Lovely write. H🌷
13th Nov 2024 5:30am
