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Frosty Autumn Leaves
In our minds your memory burns bright
Gone too soon, laid to rest, eternally
The autumn leaves and frost
Decorate your absence
Memories of happiness
Memories of love
Long, winding roads led you home
Led us on different paths
Tangled like branches
Lost in the sound of silence
Your memory lives on in the autumn leaves and frost
Silence
You live on
Gone too soon, laid to rest, eternally
The autumn leaves and frost
Decorate your absence
Memories of happiness
Memories of love
Long, winding roads led you home
Led us on different paths
Tangled like branches
Lost in the sound of silence
Your memory lives on in the autumn leaves and frost
Silence
You live on
Published 4th Nov 2024
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5th Nov 2024 00:00am
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6th Nov 2024 4:55pm
Really good, I like how you linked the memory to the
autumn leaves and frost. Different paths tangled like
branches - that's really good too.
Overall great job!
autumn leaves and frost. Different paths tangled like
branches - that's really good too.
Overall great job!
6th Nov 2024 4:59pm
Thanks Debbie. I'm glad you read this piece. Thanks for the RL entry.
