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Promising Him

I made you a promise
You gave me a vow
You hold out your wrists
You're tied to me now
 
A ribbon of white
For only one night  
Your eyes say it all
As you continue to fall
 
This is a culmination of events.
Of longing and desires
Of passions unspent
And embers build to a fire
 
I'll take care of you.
As I touch your face
Looking at you
Your  Immaculate grace
 
Shead off outside cares.
Stand before me
Beautiful and bare
So my eyes can see
 
 
I place a kiss
A barest of touches
On wounds that are hidden
Feeling exposed by our discussions
 
A slight groan escape
Allowing intimacy and fate
Time to show you affection
With reverence and  adoration
 
The lower I go
Leaving trails so bold
With kisses and the occasional taste
Craving your skin in my haste
 
Breathing you in  
Engraving you in my mind
This gift I don’t take lightly
It is not bound by time
 
I  kneel before you.
To honor the crown
For every king
 A coronation is a bond
 
I take a seat
On heels before thee
As your ethos appears
Place it on my tongue for you to see
 
In warmth and control
Restraints unfold
 
Thrust and trembling
Relinquishing the keys
Unlocking the chamber
For me see
 
The wait is too long.
Not wanting to break the spell.
Laying  down before you
It is time for you to take the helm.
 
Gripping thighs  
Waiting and glistening
For you to enter
“Take me; there is no more waiting.”
 
Entering in body and soul
Eyes locked in a hypnotic hold.
 
Need replace rhythm
An understanding is met
This will be as tender as it gets
 
Stroke and thrust
Building a need
On the verge to combust
“Promise,” he pleads
 
Hit with the force of the mountain side  
The Titanic starts to sink
There is nowhere to hide
All your pain I will drink
 
I promise this is not our last, but just the first
It will take a lot more to quench and diminish your thirst.
 
 The dam is broken
It would be cruel of me
To lock you back up
Throw away the key
 
I kiss trembling lips.
Conveying the next step
“A promise is given, and a promise will be kept.”
Written by fianaturie8 (Fia Naturie)
Published
Author's Note
I am not great at writing romance, but I do try. Women love to be romanced and I believe men do too.
This about showing vulnerability without him feeling he is not.... enough
The white ribbon is a sign of purity and I used it as a symbol of pure intentions for the event
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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