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beautifully dying days
pale pearl grey of haze
shifting across a slowly lightening sky
revealing what is concealed...briefly
before settling restlessly
upon reluctant dawn
mind slips into the shadows
studying symbology
as untethered foliage drifts
dying bits of memory
brilliant hues of last gasp
before decay takes its place
becoming nutrients
for rebirth
& upcoming tomorrows
fertilizing hopes
how like reality it seems
when summer days fade
time slips away
bursting with desperate exuberance
collapsing with final vibrance
it's been a season
...or more...
of aching & learning
love & loss
dying away with yesterday
as leaves skitter across the street
whispering of their months in the sun
I am inspired
to be as hopeful
...as autumn
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Re. beautifully dying days
2nd Nov 2024 2:56pm
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24th Nov 2024 11:46pm
Re. beautifully dying days
2nd Nov 2024 3:10pm
autumn seems to give it all its got
i've always said nature teaches us
there is hope in any season if we're open to it
i've always said nature teaches us
there is hope in any season if we're open to it
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24th Nov 2024 11:47pm
Re. beautifully dying days
2nd Nov 2024 4:59pm
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24th Nov 2024 11:48pm
Re. beautifully dying days
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2024 5:00pm
As usual, no words to say how deeply this resonated.
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24th Nov 2024 11:48pm
Re. beautifully dying days
2nd Nov 2024 9:21pm
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Re. beautifully dying days
3rd Nov 2024 00:21am
THIS ached. The way the world seems noir when it's supposed to be so fucking bright gives way to hope in the season of statis as we prep for rebirth.
I hope your rebirth is brilliant. Your poem is.
I hope your rebirth is brilliant. Your poem is.
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Re: Re. beautifully dying days
24th Nov 2024 11:49pm
Rebirth is a new beginning in & of itself. Never a bad thing. Thank you, Betty
Re. beautifully dying days
3rd Nov 2024 2:38am
Beautifully written, Willow. Into the list it belongs. Loved this. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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24th Nov 2024 11:50pm
Re. beautifully dying days
4th Nov 2024 12:20pm
Autumn does make us ponder, doesn't it, makes us go inwards.
There's some amazing wording in this write.
"of aching & learning
love & loss
dying away with yesterday" > and this is just an example.
LOVE this piece, sis 💖
There's some amazing wording in this write.
"of aching & learning
love & loss
dying away with yesterday" > and this is just an example.
LOVE this piece, sis 💖
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Re: Re. beautifully dying days
24th Nov 2024 11:51pm
The heart speaks...if we're wise we listen. Thank you for the love on this, sis 💖