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The Narcissist & The Fool
Please listen while reading. Ty ♥️
Disturbed: Don’t tell me - featuring Ann Wilson https://youtu.be/qDq0iwqnIl0?si=T-nQu-C_Q8QG6S5X
When I say I hate you
I truly mean it
all of you
devils spawn
I sincerely feel it!
YOU ARE TRASH
yet I stay…
The Narcissist & The Fool
some people never leave…
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Copyright © October 2024 M. Doucette
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Re. The Narcissist & The Fool
31st Oct 2024 00:12am
hello beautiful Jackie I feel your sadness here I often feel utterly rejected and yet I stay this is deeply felt hugs ❤️
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31st Oct 2024 00:15am
I am just so black inside.
I do love you sister, always have always will.
Sorry u feel my life in your own life..
(((((( Brenda)))))))
Love Jackie ♥️
I do love you sister, always have always will.
Sorry u feel my life in your own life..
(((((( Brenda)))))))
Love Jackie ♥️
Re: Re. The Narcissist & The Fool
31st Oct 2024 2:43am
hi Jackie beautiful this is a familiar feeling for me I think I get along with nature better than people I hope your night gets better perhaps light a candle and connect with the night you live in the perfect place to do it I think 💕
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It’s funny that you say light a candle cause i did light one and this is the first time I lit a candle in a while and then I wrote this. Nothing’s ever gonna get better until I get better and I can’t get better because I’m fucked in the head..
Love you Brenda xo
Jackie xoxo
Love you Brenda xo
Jackie xoxo
Re. The Narcissist & The Fool
31st Oct 2024 1:03am
I tried listening to the music but it wouldn't go on.
This is dark indeed and full of hate. Not for the site I hope.
This is dark indeed and full of hate. Not for the site I hope.
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Re: Re. The Narcissist & The Fool
31st Oct 2024 2:29am
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Nope Dragon, this is not for this site. Just my own fucked up life and surroundings..
Xo
Love
Jackie
Xo
Love
Jackie
Re: Re. The Narcissist & The Fool
31st Oct 2024 3:59am
Re. The Narcissist & The Fool
31st Oct 2024 3:22am
Dear J,
Alas, there are times and then there are TIMES. I will sit and wonder WTF? I found I could relate to the bare bones rawness of this poem. You lay it out there in plain speak where your reader doesn’t have to guess, just nod in understanding. xx H🌷
Alas, there are times and then there are TIMES. I will sit and wonder WTF? I found I could relate to the bare bones rawness of this poem. You lay it out there in plain speak where your reader doesn’t have to guess, just nod in understanding. xx H🌷
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31st Oct 2024 1:06pm
Same ol same ol I am the fool.
It was nice to see you here today. Thanks for stopping by. Love you H ♥️
Always Jackie xoxo
It was nice to see you here today. Thanks for stopping by. Love you H ♥️
Always Jackie xoxo
Re. The Narcissist & The Fool
31st Oct 2024 11:36am
Felt your words here Jackie and great tune, I used to dig a bit of Heart back in the day ❤️
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Re: Re. The Narcissist & The Fool
31st Oct 2024 1:07pm
I saw them live in concert in Daytona Beach in the 80s. It was awesome. I still listen to heart. I thought this colaberation was spot on.
Thanks Pete
Jackie xo
Thanks Pete
Jackie xo