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Sinister Mind
Outside in the distance a black cat moans
Underneath a blistered sky the stars revolt
Lost in the wilderness while casting stones
Testing fate on the edge of a lightning-bolt
Strangers gather around the mystic stream
In need of quenching some forgotten thirst
Wandering across miles guided by a dream
Only to realize the journey has been cursed
Death will consume them all before sunrise
Silently a creature approaches from behind
Overwhelmed taken completely by surprise
Falling victim to a madman’s sinister mind
Underneath a blistered sky the stars revolt
Lost in the wilderness while casting stones
Testing fate on the edge of a lightning-bolt
Strangers gather around the mystic stream
In need of quenching some forgotten thirst
Wandering across miles guided by a dream
Only to realize the journey has been cursed
Death will consume them all before sunrise
Silently a creature approaches from behind
Overwhelmed taken completely by surprise
Falling victim to a madman’s sinister mind
Published 30th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. I guess this would qualify as having a Halloween flavor. What you think? Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" What you gonna do
Time's caught up with you
Now you wait your turn
You know there's no return."
- Geezer Butler
- Damian DeadLove
" What you gonna do
Time's caught up with you
Now you wait your turn
You know there's no return."
- Geezer Butler
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30th Oct 2024 8:25am
That was chilling but so so good.
You did an amazing job with this.
AND I appreciate you!
You did an amazing job with this.
AND I appreciate you!
31st Oct 2024 3:30am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Debbie. I'm glad you liked it. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
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30th Oct 2024 9:36am
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30th Oct 2024 9:46am
31st Oct 2024 3:35am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Really means a lot to me coming from a writer who is amazing when it comes to the horror/dark realm. Appreciate you.
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31st Oct 2024 10:05am
30th Oct 2024 10:32am
31st Oct 2024 3:37am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
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30th Oct 2024 11:45am
Yes before I got to your notes Damian, I was enjoying this dark piece, superb ❤️
31st Oct 2024 3:38am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate you.
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30th Oct 2024 6:19pm
Definitely a Halloween vibe to it! Much enjoyed the imagery and suspense of it.
31st Oct 2024 3:40am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate you.
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DL
30th Oct 2024 9:32pm
31st Oct 2024 3:43am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. I thought since I hadn't done a Halloween write yet, that I better do it before October ends. Appreciate you.
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31st Oct 2024 10:15pm
Life imitating art? Or horror stories coming to reality?
Powerful write, it really conjures the sinister plans that may come to happen, written with a great and strong lexicon.
Excellent stuff.
Powerful write, it really conjures the sinister plans that may come to happen, written with a great and strong lexicon.
Excellent stuff.
1st Nov 2024 3:19am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
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1st Nov 2024 3:59am
Very lucid and vivid depiction. It almost reminds me of some King Crimson lyrics or something, only more sinister and darker. Your stanzas are solid in this, as you make compacted points that carry in transition to build the overall moral message conveyed. I can just imagine some of what takes place, as I read this. Great write, my friend. Thanks for sharing.
1st Nov 2024 5:04am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. Dig the, King Crimson shout out. I'm glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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