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Life's Ride
How many hungering heartbeats
until your life has flown bye?
The ecstatic events are just
a flash in time.
And the painful days
compose an immortal rhyme.
Let me ask you.
Did you take life's ride?
Don't lie.
In defiance of gravity,
to fill your cavity,
and feel acutely alive.
In the heat of my mind,
memories swelter.
Begging for the heart's tender shelter.
Destiny's fragments fall from a starry sky
Learn to live without the stalking question why.
Your evolution wants a surprise.
until your life has flown bye?
The ecstatic events are just
a flash in time.
And the painful days
compose an immortal rhyme.
Let me ask you.
Did you take life's ride?
Don't lie.
In defiance of gravity,
to fill your cavity,
and feel acutely alive.
In the heat of my mind,
memories swelter.
Begging for the heart's tender shelter.
Destiny's fragments fall from a starry sky
Learn to live without the stalking question why.
Your evolution wants a surprise.
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Re. Life's Ride
30th Oct 2024 2:01am
Beautifully written, Debbie. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
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Re: Re. Life's Ride
30th Oct 2024 2:12am
Re. Life's Ride
30th Oct 2024 2:22am
hello beautiful Debbie I hope I am evolving within this life this is lovely 💕
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Re: Re. Life's Ride
30th Oct 2024 2:33am
Re. Life's Ride
30th Oct 2024 2:24am
This write is a rhyming life!
And a great motivational piece, to help us all remain focused on what's good. We all need a kick in the butt sometimes. And this write is an excellent source for that.
Wonderfully done. Bravo!
And a great motivational piece, to help us all remain focused on what's good. We all need a kick in the butt sometimes. And this write is an excellent source for that.
Wonderfully done. Bravo!
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Re: Re. Life's Ride
30th Oct 2024 2:36am
Thanks so much for your feedback. Those questions float around inside of
me sometimes. I want to live, not simply exist.
I appreciate your encouragement. 😊
me sometimes. I want to live, not simply exist.
I appreciate your encouragement. 😊
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30th Oct 2024 9:45am
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Re. Life's Ride
2nd Nov 2024 1:55pm
The speed at which time goes by is scary. It's surprising. But no surprises with our eventual demise. Evolution won't help out there. I feel your anger in questioning why any of this is fair. 😊
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Re: Re. Life's Ride
2nd Nov 2024 4:07pm
I was going for a more positive, live while you are alive. 😊
Thanks for your thoughts and stopping bye.
Thanks for your thoughts and stopping bye.
Re: Re. Life's Ride
2nd Nov 2024 6:06pm
I did get that vibe too, don't worry. As we can't get those years back, we always have to make the most of the time we have now. Even so... it makes ya think, lol. 😊
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