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Look At Me
Here I am for all to see
My story in glory, look at me
Social net, their many sites
Camera, action, phones bright lights
My world, my soul, here is my wall
Random friends, I give you it all
Never met, request and send
Latest fads, following trends
Timeline, pic, vid upload
Public, flick, watch, unfold
So here I am for all to see
A web celeb... I'm yours for free
My story in glory, look at me
Social net, their many sites
Camera, action, phones bright lights
My world, my soul, here is my wall
Random friends, I give you it all
Never met, request and send
Latest fads, following trends
Timeline, pic, vid upload
Public, flick, watch, unfold
So here I am for all to see
A web celeb... I'm yours for free
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Re. Look At Me
27th Oct 2024 8:28am
Truth. Great write, Pete. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
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27th Oct 2024 3:00pm
Re. Look At Me
27th Oct 2024 11:07am
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27th Oct 2024 2:58pm
Re. Look At Me
Anonymous
27th Oct 2024 12:57pm
True that....very well written,dear Pete ❤️
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27th Oct 2024 2:58pm
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27th Oct 2024 2:28pm
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Re. Look At Me
27th Oct 2024 2:59pm
Re. Look At Me
28th Oct 2024 9:28pm
Ugh, this is why I deleted my Facebook account years ago. All of that up there ☝️ I'm not a big fan of impersonal collecting...followers & following for the sake of numbers. Nicely done!
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28th Oct 2024 10:50pm
Re. Look At Me
30th Oct 2024 8:49pm
Great, it's a real depiction of fake friendship that isn't friendship at all and inner loneliness.
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30th Oct 2024 11:09pm
Re. Look At Me
4th Nov 2024 1:02pm
So much truth in this piece - strangers who think they know one another.
Amazing piece, Pete, with an epic last line.
...I got rid off all Social Media years ago, most of it is fake...
Amazing piece, Pete, with an epic last line.
...I got rid off all Social Media years ago, most of it is fake...
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Re: Re. Look At Me
4th Nov 2024 1:16pm
Yes so true Duende, I have friends who are in relationships what are toxic then they post these posts all loved up 😂 then there are the one's who advertise to burglars, when they are going on holiday, the shops, etc 😂 anyways thanks Duende 🙃❤️