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Serve's up
the scent of you
enough to break through
raise the mast high
wave that flag of white
spread eagle below
anxious in the undertow
the tides rush in
the possibility of a win
rise to the occasion
an insatiable temptation
between the troughs
up my gears, rough
take control and fetch
the crest you'll sketch
chop the swell before
these buttons turn sore
give the order to fire
macking the desire.
enough to break through
raise the mast high
wave that flag of white
spread eagle below
anxious in the undertow
the tides rush in
the possibility of a win
rise to the occasion
an insatiable temptation
between the troughs
up my gears, rough
take control and fetch
the crest you'll sketch
chop the swell before
these buttons turn sore
give the order to fire
macking the desire.
Published 24th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Just surfing through ideas.
Posted on October 24, 2024 - https://eternalhate.tumblr.com/post/765238144560955392/serves-up
Posted on October 24, 2024 - https://eternalhate.tumblr.com/post/765238144560955392/serves-up
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25th Oct 2024 10:32pm
Love the water reference in this. Thank you for entering & good luck in the comp!
2nd Dec 2024 4:04pm
Hello 13
Very nice read..indeed
My mind took me to a passionate encounter of two souls meeting in turmoil. Both lost in an emotional swell.
I was delighted to see you still here writing.
It's been years for me.
I will catch up on your work over the next few weeks.
lisa777
Very nice read..indeed
My mind took me to a passionate encounter of two souls meeting in turmoil. Both lost in an emotional swell.
I was delighted to see you still here writing.
It's been years for me.
I will catch up on your work over the next few weeks.
lisa777
2nd Dec 2024 6:57pm
Spot on, Lisa.
I haven't been. I have wanted to.
Lately, I find myself feeling more than writing.
Glad to hear from you.
I haven't been. I have wanted to.
Lately, I find myself feeling more than writing.
Glad to hear from you.
13th Jan 2025 7:49pm
The metaphor increases the erotic power of this great poem. Hugs and love,Oral
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