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Love Poem
When they first met,
they made love with their eyes...
In her lonely nights
thoughts of him-
loving and lustful
penetrated through her mind
into her heart,
impregnating her soul;
where the thoughts fused
with her emotions
forming a zygote
of words.
Thus, how poetry was
conceived ...
they made love with their eyes...
In her lonely nights
thoughts of him-
loving and lustful
penetrated through her mind
into her heart,
impregnating her soul;
where the thoughts fused
with her emotions
forming a zygote
of words.
Thus, how poetry was
conceived ...
Published 22nd Oct 2024
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
22nd Oct 2024 11:05pm
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22nd Oct 2024 11:15pm
Love the way you dissected this piece....Your thoughts and insight are wonderful....
Thank you ,so much dear Tim..I'm truly honoured by the reading list add....❤️
Thank you ,so much dear Tim..I'm truly honoured by the reading list add....❤️
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
22nd Oct 2024 11:33pm
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22nd Oct 2024 11:34pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
22nd Oct 2024 11:35pm
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22nd Oct 2024 11:35pm
This so beautiful and captures the magic of love which does indeed make us poets. Either with a partner or unrequited love, Love does indeed make us into poets.
23rd Oct 2024 8:59am
Thank you ,Ryan for your beautiful n encouraging words of appreciation. 😊Very much appreciate you stopping by 🌹
22nd Oct 2024 11:59pm
23rd Oct 2024 9:00am
Thanks a lot ,dearest Tams. Always love your presence n this reading list add is truly an honour for me ❤️
23rd Oct 2024 3:52am
23rd Oct 2024 9:01am
23rd Oct 2024 5:57am
When thoughts of love arouse the desire to make verse of one's feelings. Beautiful piece.
23rd Oct 2024 9:02am
So glad you liked it❤️ thank you so much for honouring me with the reading list add .much appreciated 🌹
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2024 5:58am
Didn't see that ending coming.
Very pleasantly surprised!!
Much respect
Naaj
Very pleasantly surprised!!
Much respect
Naaj
23rd Oct 2024 9:03am
Thanks a bunch ,dear Naaj ❤️ So glad that this piece found a corner in your reading list add. 🌹
23rd Oct 2024 9:16am
Love that line 'they made love with their eyes'
The eyes tell a lot as well as the mind, sometimes it doesn't have to be physical touch but the above
Superb Dear 🔥❤️
The eyes tell a lot as well as the mind, sometimes it doesn't have to be physical touch but the above
Superb Dear 🔥❤️
23rd Oct 2024 9:19am
Thank you so much ,dear for your wonderful review and constant support. Much appreciate it ❤️
27th Nov 2024 10:41pm
You are truly a poet. I love the words to your work. I have decided to follow you. I wish to read more. Thank you.
28th Nov 2024 1:30pm
Oh wow, such a great compliment...thanks a bunch , dear Phillip ❤️ That's so very kind of you 💐
