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Kiss
As she draws her lips
closer to his,
titillating...teasing,
brushing them
with her whispers of love;
heat of their breath
mingles,
procreating tension- eros.
A force magnetic
pulling the opposite poles
so close,
two pairs of ruddy petals
get glued
searching for black holes
to get disintegrated
in each other's souls.
As the tongues tango
thousands of suns burst
quenching their irresistible thirst
While...
stimulating insatiable hunger
for a perpetual lust...
closer to his,
titillating...teasing,
brushing them
with her whispers of love;
heat of their breath
mingles,
procreating tension- eros.
A force magnetic
pulling the opposite poles
so close,
two pairs of ruddy petals
get glued
searching for black holes
to get disintegrated
in each other's souls.
As the tongues tango
thousands of suns burst
quenching their irresistible thirst
While...
stimulating insatiable hunger
for a perpetual lust...
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Re. Kiss
21st Oct 2024 8:55pm
Mmmmm
Kissing is the best.
I never tire reading poems about kissing and your poem is divine, poetess.
Kissing is the best.
I never tire reading poems about kissing and your poem is divine, poetess.
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21st Oct 2024 9:13pm
Thanks a bunch for the reading list add ❤️ Very much appreciate your presence on my page ,dear poetess😊
Re. Kiss
21st Oct 2024 9:31pm
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21st Oct 2024 9:32pm
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Re: Re. Kiss
22nd Oct 2024 7:30am
Wow! thanks a bunch for sharing your valuable thoughts n leaving a beautiful review. I'm glad you liked this piece . Thanks 🌹
Re: Re. Kiss
22nd Oct 2024 7:28am
Thank you so much ,poetess for gracing my page with your presence n nice review ❤️
Re. Kiss
22nd Oct 2024 3:43am
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22nd Oct 2024 8:41am
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22nd Oct 2024 8:42am
Re. Kiss
22nd Oct 2024 2:19pm
A lasting impression of love to.stert.with the first kiss and then it gets deeper.and deeper. I love your poem.
Hugs
KS
Hugs
KS
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Re: Re. Kiss
22nd Oct 2024 2:27pm
Re. Kiss
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2024 5:58pm
Kissing is indeed a divine art.
This vibe was beautifully expressed!!
This vibe was beautifully expressed!!
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22nd Oct 2024 6:01pm
Re. Kiss
22nd Oct 2024 7:37pm
This is sumptuous, gorgeous, a feast of sensual poetry. Loved where this took me today. Truly a work of sensual art.
John
John
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Re: Re. Kiss
22nd Oct 2024 7:43pm
Hi dear poet,
I'm all over the moon after reading your review. Thanks a lot for your generous comments n the reading list add. I'm truly honoured , Sir 🌹
I'm all over the moon after reading your review. Thanks a lot for your generous comments n the reading list add. I'm truly honoured , Sir 🌹
Re. Kiss
26th Nov 2024 3:57pm
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26th Nov 2024 4:03pm
Re. Kiss
1st Jan 2025 11:56am
A look into seductive attraction, favourite lines:
As she draws her lips
closer to his,
titillating...teasing,
brushing them
with her whispers of love;
heat of their breath
mingles,
procreating tension- eros.
A force magnetic
pulling the opposite poles
so close,
two pairs of ruddy petals
get glued [the clincher]
As she draws her lips
closer to his,
titillating...teasing,
brushing them
with her whispers of love;
heat of their breath
mingles,
procreating tension- eros.
A force magnetic
pulling the opposite poles
so close,
two pairs of ruddy petals
get glued [the clincher]
1
Re: Re. Kiss
2nd Jan 2025 8:31pm
Thanks a lot ,dear poet. I really appreciate your visit n kind review.
Happy new year 🎊
Happy new year 🎊
Re. Kiss
11th Jan 2025 10:32pm
I could get lost in this kiss and never want to find my way out ....
BIG LIKE ❣
BIG LIKE ❣
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12th Jan 2025 8:52pm
Re. Kiss
16th Jan 2025 2:30pm
This poem, "Kiss," is a passionate and sensual exploration of romantic desire, intimacy, and connection.Good ink.
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Re: Re. Kiss
17th Jan 2025 12:24pm
Thank you so much for your beautiful review. I highly appreciate you gracing my page with your kind presence. 🌹