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Kiss
As she draws her lips
closer to his,
titillating...teasing,
brushing them
with her whispers of love;
heat of their breath
mingles,
procreating tension- eros.
A force magnetic
pulling the opposite poles
so close,
two pairs of ruddy petals
get glued
searching for black holes
to get disintegrated
in each other's souls.
As the tongues tango
thousands of suns burst
quenching their irresistible thirst
But...
stimulating insatiable hunger
for a perpetual lust...
closer to his,
titillating...teasing,
brushing them
with her whispers of love;
heat of their breath
mingles,
procreating tension- eros.
A force magnetic
pulling the opposite poles
so close,
two pairs of ruddy petals
get glued
searching for black holes
to get disintegrated
in each other's souls.
As the tongues tango
thousands of suns burst
quenching their irresistible thirst
But...
stimulating insatiable hunger
for a perpetual lust...
Published 21st Oct 2024
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21st Oct 2024 7:50pm
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21st Oct 2024 8:55pm
Mmmmm
Kissing is the best.
I never tire reading poems about kissing and your poem is divine, poetess.
Kissing is the best.
I never tire reading poems about kissing and your poem is divine, poetess.
21st Oct 2024 8:55pm
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Thanks a bunch for the reading list add ❤️ Very much appreciate your presence on my page ,dear poetess😊
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Anonymous
21st Oct 2024 10:52pm
The initiation of the kiss, when the eyes meet and their gaze goes towards each others lips, when that beautiful connection is made and the spell begins...what an exquisite experience that is.
Your words express the ravishing pleasure a kiss can bring. The heat of the breath, and the 'tongues tangos'......wow! I love the sensual sentiments and descriptions you've created. I can't help but dream about it now and the arousing feelings it brings up.
Excellent poem, I.D.
Your words express the ravishing pleasure a kiss can bring. The heat of the breath, and the 'tongues tangos'......wow! I love the sensual sentiments and descriptions you've created. I can't help but dream about it now and the arousing feelings it brings up.
Excellent poem, I.D.
22nd Oct 2024 7:30am
Wow! thanks a bunch for sharing your valuable thoughts n leaving a beautiful review. I'm glad you liked this piece . Thanks 🌹
22nd Oct 2024 2:42am
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Thank you so much ,poetess for gracing my page with your presence n nice review ❤️
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22nd Oct 2024 2:19pm
A lasting impression of love to.stert.with the first kiss and then it gets deeper.and deeper. I love your poem.
Hugs
KS
Hugs
KS
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22nd Oct 2024 7:37pm
This is sumptuous, gorgeous, a feast of sensual poetry. Loved where this took me today. Truly a work of sensual art.
John
John
22nd Oct 2024 7:43pm
Hi dear poet,
I'm all over the moon after reading your review. Thanks a lot for your generous comments n the reading list add. I'm truly honoured , Sir 🌹
I'm all over the moon after reading your review. Thanks a lot for your generous comments n the reading list add. I'm truly honoured , Sir 🌹
26th Nov 2024 3:57pm
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