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Vulnerability and Hellfire
Sometimes
Your give me your vulnerable
One moment at a time
Each syllable
Dancing
A rthymic flow
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
Either way
I can't resist
The sweet sensation
Or your fiery finish
That is you
Your give me your vulnerable
One moment at a time
Each syllable
Dancing
A rthymic flow
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
Either way
I can't resist
The sweet sensation
Or your fiery finish
That is you
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
Anonymous
18th Oct 2024 7:40pm
Amen.
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18th Oct 2024 7:42pm
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18th Oct 2024 7:46pm
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18th Oct 2024 8:06pm
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
18th Oct 2024 8:04pm
This is rhythmically pleasing to the ear. But it also - to me - reflects the perspective of the painting which seems a mixture of the straight and narrow with a dab of chaos.
It's unique to add both the art of poetry as it's reflected through paintings.
Well done.
It's unique to add both the art of poetry as it's reflected through paintings.
Well done.
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Re: Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
18th Oct 2024 8:08pm
Usually I write the poem first and then select from my many paintings... I really like doing the merge of crafts.
I totally agree with how you interpreted my vision on this entry !
Thanks Tim ✋
I totally agree with how you interpreted my vision on this entry !
Thanks Tim ✋
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18th Oct 2024 9:05pm
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20th Oct 2024 5:10am
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
18th Oct 2024 9:53pm
good afternoon dearest Poet this is so tender and fiery I love the painting I'm painting today too ❤️
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Re: Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
18th Oct 2024 9:56pm
Good afternoon Brenda
This was a painting without a home so it was time to expose her next to a neo-love poem.
Hope all is well with you and your painting is flourishing...
Thx
💌
This was a painting without a home so it was time to expose her next to a neo-love poem.
Hope all is well with you and your painting is flourishing...
Thx
💌
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
18th Oct 2024 10:06pm
You do an amazing job of merging writing with artwork. This is what makes you a true Artist 🎨
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Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
18th Oct 2024 10:31pm
It's one of my favorite parts of DUP, having the space to put up a BIG abstract to match the words.
This is a lovely comment Willow.
I thank you kindly
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This is a lovely comment Willow.
I thank you kindly
💌
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
18th Oct 2024 10:35pm
Love me some Vulnerability and Hellfire---what a possible explosion. Truth to power my King
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18th Oct 2024 10:49pm
She is my Queen of eroticism....I'm always in awe ....
Thank you Colonel O !
I remain..
Thank you Colonel O !
I remain..
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
19th Oct 2024 2:42am
A warrior with a chink in his/her armor, we think both piece and pic confirms. Tight work dude
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19th Oct 2024 2:56am
Keeps us in check or maybe it's me in check.
Hmmm
Reasons to be cheerful, part 4
Remember Ian Drury and the Blockheads ??
Thx ME
Hmmm
Reasons to be cheerful, part 4
Remember Ian Drury and the Blockheads ??
Thx ME
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
19th Oct 2024 11:43am
"Each syllable
Dancing
A rthymic flow" > love your poem and especially these lines.
Intriguing painting, pairs beautifully with your piece.
Dancing
A rthymic flow" > love your poem and especially these lines.
Intriguing painting, pairs beautifully with your piece.
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Re: Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
19th Oct 2024 11:49am
Since I deleted 841 poems last week I'm feeling freer to write again. There's been an absence in this craft.
This was an older poem I reworked and added to. It's funny how that works. A line or a word or 2 make all the difference. Fresh again...
Appreciate your comment on the poem and art.
I'm back....
Thank you
This was an older poem I reworked and added to. It's funny how that works. A line or a word or 2 make all the difference. Fresh again...
Appreciate your comment on the poem and art.
I'm back....
Thank you
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
19th Oct 2024 11:41pm
The art feels both playful and angry to me... perfect pairing with your words. It hits the right spot on the intensity meter.
❤️k
❤️k
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Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
20th Oct 2024 00:14am
I might have deleted 841 poems last week but now I'm freed up to spread my sexual gospel again.
Praise the Poetspeak, he's doing your dirty work ...
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Praise the Poetspeak, he's doing your dirty work ...
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Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
20th Oct 2024 2:25am
Dear PS,
I liked the energy of the poem and accompanying art. While there was sizzle and cha cha cha, there was also warmth and connection. Total Dig!
H🌷
I liked the energy of the poem and accompanying art. While there was sizzle and cha cha cha, there was also warmth and connection. Total Dig!
H🌷
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Re: Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
20th Oct 2024 3:04am
Dear H,
I always say Connection is EVERYTHING !
When you have that even the difficult times go smoother....
Appreciate your comment and coveted RL !!
Many thanks
🤠💟
I always say Connection is EVERYTHING !
When you have that even the difficult times go smoother....
Appreciate your comment and coveted RL !!
Many thanks
🤠💟
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20th Oct 2024 6:40pm
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20th Oct 2024 6:47pm
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
22nd Oct 2024 3:25am
Enjoyed this.
Favorite lines
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
The colors in the painting suited the poem
Favorite lines
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
The colors in the painting suited the poem
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Re: Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
22nd Oct 2024 3:27am
It's a yin yang all all the way Fia.
I think the title really works.
Appreciate the nod
Thx
I think the title really works.
Appreciate the nod
Thx
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26th Oct 2024 2:49am
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1st Nov 2024 1:14am
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
1st Nov 2024 1:17am
Thank you Billy
I had someone to write about and it was easy to find art to match my flow...
Appreciate your comment Mister !
I had someone to write about and it was easy to find art to match my flow...
Appreciate your comment Mister !
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1st Nov 2024 12:52pm
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1st Nov 2024 4:44pm
Nobody is perfect and if they were that would be annoying too...
Many thanks on this write
Appreciate
Many thanks on this write
Appreciate
Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
22nd Nov 2024 10:05pm
What a lucky person, to be seen and loved so vividly. I enjoy your paintings. What are some of your influences?
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Re: Re. Vulnerability and Hellfire
22nd Nov 2024 11:52pm
She is lucky to have my love.
Not sure she appreciates it but she's short on words so keeps me guessing...
My art influences are de Kooning, Rothko, and living in a giant city. There's art and texture everywhere. I'm extremely visual so I beg, borrow and steal ideas and use them kindly.
Thanks so much for your comment..
Not sure she appreciates it but she's short on words so keeps me guessing...
My art influences are de Kooning, Rothko, and living in a giant city. There's art and texture everywhere. I'm extremely visual so I beg, borrow and steal ideas and use them kindly.
Thanks so much for your comment..