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Possiblities
quietly
seeping into
conciousness
a dimmer switch
turned up slowly
to brightness
obsure
grey and black
of the heart
now seen
under
starlight
streams of
possibility
enlightened
hopes
dreams
re-ignited
new hues
colours
uncovered
re-discovered
vitality
within
when
finally
seen
known
understood
in a breath
seeping into
conciousness
a dimmer switch
turned up slowly
to brightness
obsure
grey and black
of the heart
now seen
under
starlight
streams of
possibility
enlightened
hopes
dreams
re-ignited
new hues
colours
uncovered
re-discovered
vitality
within
when
finally
seen
known
understood
in a breath
Published 17th Oct 2024
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2024 6:41pm
Infatuation is like a fire that's ignited in the heart at first glance of what we conceive as someone beautiful.
Your thoughts are well stated and lay out the thought patterns with much accuracy.
Your thoughts are well stated and lay out the thought patterns with much accuracy.
17th Oct 2024 6:56pm
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17th Oct 2024 7:07pm
18th Oct 2024 8:21am
thank ypu for RL
I try my best to express feelings
don't wlalwaus get it right
I try my best to express feelings
don't wlalwaus get it right
18th Oct 2024 3:51pm
18th Oct 2024 4:47pm
