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Longtime Baby
Been a long time since that ship had sailed
been a long time
long time baby
i remember when i drank from your well
been a long time
been a long time baby
the man i was now an empty shell
been a long time
a long time baby
you're as beautiful now still as frail
been a long time
a long time baby
too long i'm sorry
been a long time
long time baby
i remember when i drank from your well
been a long time
been a long time baby
the man i was now an empty shell
been a long time
a long time baby
you're as beautiful now still as frail
been a long time
a long time baby
too long i'm sorry
Published 17th Oct 2024
| Edited 26th Oct 2024
Author's Note
This was slow pace in my head, two worldly people finding redemption in the ashes of words of truth honesty and the understanding of what we all must come too
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2024 6:22pm
Relationships can go awful deep into the emotional pool. Years may go by but regrets and consternations are still like stains on the wall you can't get off. I can almost get the sense of someone seeing an old lover walk into a bar/restaurant and catching her eyes.
This is short, but relatable.
This is short, but relatable.
17th Oct 2024 7:03pm
26th Oct 2024 6:30pm
26th Oct 2024 7:29pm
Thanks for the read Lozzamus. I felt the movement of jazz and cigarette smoke dancing in the air and a bourbon neat waiting to talk. Have a great evening.
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