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Lost Souls
Far and wide the night he pries
Sins shy from serpent eyes
Dreams repeat, all alone
Incomplete and unbeknown
Time stands still on hallow ground
Lost until a soul is found
Sins shy from serpent eyes
Dreams repeat, all alone
Incomplete and unbeknown
Time stands still on hallow ground
Lost until a soul is found
Published 7th Oct 2024
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7th Oct 2024 11:15am
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2024 11:32am
Thrilling ... enjoyed it 👌
7th Oct 2024 12:53pm
7th Oct 2024 11:58am
It must be the season, but I do wonder: aren't we all a little lost? Great piece, Pete 🙏🏻
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8th Oct 2024 11:36pm
This could almost have been the forerunner to the end commentary on Micheal Jackson's 'Thriller' track, for sure. That voice would suit this down to the ground or perfectly! Either way, it's a thrilling little read. Definitely not filler! 😉
9th Oct 2024 00:34am
