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Peeling The Layers Back
Innocence remains hidden behind a mask
Viewing life through some distorted mirror
Taught not to take everything at face value
Peeling layers back till it’s all made clearer
Viewing life through some distorted mirror
Taught not to take everything at face value
Peeling layers back till it’s all made clearer
Author's Note
Late night musing. Never judge a book by its cover. Things are not always as they appear.
- Damian DeadLove
"And I know
Baby, just how you feel
You've got to roll
With the punches to get to what's real"
- David Lee Roth
- Damian DeadLove
"And I know
Baby, just how you feel
You've got to roll
With the punches to get to what's real"
- David Lee Roth
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Re. Peeling The Layers Back
1st Oct 2024 8:14am
So so true Damian, I know it's an old cliche, I guess sometimes it's human nature... I've always gone by no matter what a person looks like or they seem sad that person will have a story ❤️
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2nd Oct 2024 5:05am
I agree, Pete. Everyone has a story, and we haven't walked in their shoes. So glad you liked the write. Thanks for reading. Appreciate you.
DL
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1st Oct 2024 10:41am
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2nd Oct 2024 5:09am
Thanks so much, Debbie. Yeah, I'm kinda of a big Van Halen fan. Glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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Re. Peeling The Layers Back
1st Oct 2024 11:18am
So many layers my friend. I don't even know how many layers I actually have. Great, truthful poem.
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2nd Oct 2024 5:10am
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1st Oct 2024 12:13pm
So true! In fact, sometimes a lot of pain hides behind the biggest smille. If only people would stop looking at how someone appears to be and ask how they are really doing.
The world be a more beautiful place. Great piece, Damian.
The world be a more beautiful place. Great piece, Damian.
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Re: Re. Peeling The Layers Back
2nd Oct 2024 5:12am
Totally agree with you, Duende. Always enjoy reading your commentary. Appreciate you.
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Re. Peeling The Layers Back
1st Oct 2024 6:27pm
Sometimes things are not what they appear to be only hiding behind a mask of perception ✍️👍🪬 SHAMAN 🪬📿🪷🪬
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2nd Oct 2024 5:13am
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2nd Oct 2024 5:56am
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2nd Oct 2024 5:14am
I agree, Shiloh. Thanks for reading and your continued support. Appreciate you.
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Re. Peeling The Layers Back
1st Oct 2024 11:46pm
Dear D,
This makes me think if we ever peel away all the layers? Do we keep some layers in place for self preservation? I can never tell. However, I enjoyed this poem greatly. You so wonderfully express emotion with terrific meter and word placement. Lovely write. H🌷
This makes me think if we ever peel away all the layers? Do we keep some layers in place for self preservation? I can never tell. However, I enjoyed this poem greatly. You so wonderfully express emotion with terrific meter and word placement. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Peeling The Layers Back
2nd Oct 2024 5:18am
Thanks so much for reading, H. I would think we would keep some in place, otherwise we'd be to exposed to all the elements. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
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2nd Oct 2024 4:49am
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