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I wish
I wish
I were your dish
So you would
handle this china ware
with love and care
bang me on your table or bed
but be careful not to break
Lay some meat upon me
hot and spicy as you like it to be
Use your fork and spoon
Play some tune
Raze me ,cut me
or tickle me ,whatever you wish
Eat mousse off me
holding this plate gently
Lick off the choco sause
lick until I'm clean
carry me in your hands
to wash off the meal
soap it all over
I'll be in a submissive mood
rub every curve n line
as softly as you could
Hold me tight
as if I were your lifeline
Turn me,Flip me over
baby, I'll be your toy
Pour water on me
rubbing me hard
till you hear me
screeching in pain
Jolt me fast
to shake off every drip
Use your towel
to wipe my hip
Blow me dry
with your warm breath
Then kiss goodbye
your shinning pottery
Use me every day
morning ,noon and night
If you ever drop me
fill in the cracks with your teardrops
I'll be your kintsugi
adorning your memory shelf for life
I'll be happy as ever
to be your cherished dish
I were your dish
So you would
handle this china ware
with love and care
bang me on your table or bed
but be careful not to break
Lay some meat upon me
hot and spicy as you like it to be
Use your fork and spoon
Play some tune
Raze me ,cut me
or tickle me ,whatever you wish
Eat mousse off me
holding this plate gently
Lick off the choco sause
lick until I'm clean
carry me in your hands
to wash off the meal
soap it all over
I'll be in a submissive mood
rub every curve n line
as softly as you could
Hold me tight
as if I were your lifeline
Turn me,Flip me over
baby, I'll be your toy
Pour water on me
rubbing me hard
till you hear me
screeching in pain
Jolt me fast
to shake off every drip
Use your towel
to wipe my hip
Blow me dry
with your warm breath
Then kiss goodbye
your shinning pottery
Use me every day
morning ,noon and night
If you ever drop me
fill in the cracks with your teardrops
I'll be your kintsugi
adorning your memory shelf for life
I'll be happy as ever
to be your cherished dish
Published 30th Sep 2024
Author's Note
Aah...I know the erotica ended up wrapped in sentimentality...but that's me
Kintsugi.
There is beauty in the broken.
Kintsugi is a Japanese art that repairs broken pottery with gold, rendering a new piece that is more exquisite than it was before the break. It literally means to join with gold.
Kintsugi.
There is beauty in the broken.
Kintsugi is a Japanese art that repairs broken pottery with gold, rendering a new piece that is more exquisite than it was before the break. It literally means to join with gold.
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30th Sep 2024 9:35pm
30th Sep 2024 9:37pm
Thank you my talented poetess..I really feel honoured that this piece has made it to your reading list.
Thanks ❤️
Thanks ❤️
30th Sep 2024 10:20pm
30th Sep 2024 10:22pm
Hahaha....Your better half will be all over the moon ;)
Thank you so much ,dear poet for your read n comment 🌹
Thank you so much ,dear poet for your read n comment 🌹
1st Oct 2024 1:06am
I like how you give such a different perspective to poetry. Really makes your poems so deep. Something like erotica usually comes out dirty or sensual, sometimes loving. But this gives a bit of sympathy and caring. Very refreshing read.
Wonderful ink as always, friend 😁
Wonderful ink as always, friend 😁
1st Oct 2024 10:15am
DC my friend and fantastic poet , your kind review always sends me on cloud 9. Love your comments. Thanks a lot ,dear. I'm really honoured by the reading list add 🌹😊
1st Oct 2024 2:22am
I’m speechless (not really, I talk way too much)
This is heavenly, poetess
I WANT this.
And yes, there is beauty in the broken.
Well done :)
This is heavenly, poetess
I WANT this.
And yes, there is beauty in the broken.
Well done :)
1st Oct 2024 11:07am
God, such great comments coming from a poet of your calibre , I'm honoured n flattered❤️
I'm so happy you liked this piece.thanks a lot ,dear Mary 🌹
I'm so happy you liked this piece.thanks a lot ,dear Mary 🌹
1st Oct 2024 8:19pm
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1st Oct 2024 5:58am
Wrapped in sentimentality it may have ended up as, but still a beautiful piece which likens being loved to being a cherished piece of china. (My old china' is a love endearment in some English regions.). Favourite verse for suggestiveness:
bang me on your table or bed
but be careful not to break
bang me on your table or bed
but be careful not to break
1st Oct 2024 10:16am
Thank you so much, dear Solomon .. really appreciate your read n thoughts on this poem. ❤️
1st Oct 2024 8:21am
If only all dishes were as exciting as this and fascinating stuff about Kintsugi ❤️
1st Oct 2024 10:11am
