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The Banquet Of Dread
The night is thick with whispered breath,
As I prepare this feast of death.
Witches slink from shadows deep,
Goblins crawl while mortals sleep.
The door creaks wide, they shuffle in,
With toothy grins and rotting skin.
I greet them all with eyes alight
Tonight, we dine in endless night.
The table’s draped in crimson thread,
A severed head, the centerpiece spread.
Ribs splayed open, hearts still beat,
Their hollow eyes, my gift of meat.
A stench of fear hangs in the air,
Fingers twitching, caught mid-prayer.
I carve a limb, slow and thick,
The blood runs dark, the scent—so sick.
"Indulge yourselves," I softly hiss,
"No soul tonight shall leave amiss."
The ghouls dig in with claws of bone,
The witches feast with guttural groan.
The walls are draped in shadow's grime,
As time dissolves—no longer time.
They scream, they writhe, they gnash and bite,
Feeding deep into the night.
The moon looks on with hollow face,
As I serve the final trace—
A soul, still warm, writhing in flame,
A whispered voice that knows it's name.
The feast is done, the night complete,
No heart remains, no pulse, no beat.
All Hallows’ Eve fades to black,
But they’ll be back. Oh, they’ll be back.
As I prepare this feast of death.
Witches slink from shadows deep,
Goblins crawl while mortals sleep.
The door creaks wide, they shuffle in,
With toothy grins and rotting skin.
I greet them all with eyes alight
Tonight, we dine in endless night.
The table’s draped in crimson thread,
A severed head, the centerpiece spread.
Ribs splayed open, hearts still beat,
Their hollow eyes, my gift of meat.
A stench of fear hangs in the air,
Fingers twitching, caught mid-prayer.
I carve a limb, slow and thick,
The blood runs dark, the scent—so sick.
"Indulge yourselves," I softly hiss,
"No soul tonight shall leave amiss."
The ghouls dig in with claws of bone,
The witches feast with guttural groan.
The walls are draped in shadow's grime,
As time dissolves—no longer time.
They scream, they writhe, they gnash and bite,
Feeding deep into the night.
The moon looks on with hollow face,
As I serve the final trace—
A soul, still warm, writhing in flame,
A whispered voice that knows it's name.
The feast is done, the night complete,
No heart remains, no pulse, no beat.
All Hallows’ Eve fades to black,
But they’ll be back. Oh, they’ll be back.
Written by
Shilohverse
(Shiloh Mello)
Published 28th Sep 2024
Author's Note
For the spooky event comp...
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Re. The Banquet Of Dread
28th Sep 2024 11:35pm
This deserves to win the competition.
It read so smooth & flawlessly and was creepy as hell.
Loved it!
It read so smooth & flawlessly and was creepy as hell.
Loved it!
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Re. The Banquet Of Dread
29th Sep 2024 00:51am
A picture of food that goes right there to a haunted place
to be served as an honor to Halloween 🎃😁🤨👍.
🐺 WOLF BAY 🐺
to be served as an honor to Halloween 🎃😁🤨👍.
🐺 WOLF BAY 🐺
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Re. The Banquet Of Dread
29th Sep 2024 3:21am
Ok now I’m shocked … you won the comp and now you’re after my soul… I should have kept my mouth shut
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Re: Re. The Banquet Of Dread
29th Sep 2024 3:24am
Haha. I'll get your soul, my pretty 🧹🪄.
But honestly, you helped me step outside myself and write something different. Thank you, Sam.
But honestly, you helped me step outside myself and write something different. Thank you, Sam.
Re: Re. The Banquet Of Dread
29th Sep 2024 3:28am
You’re welcome… now I’ll go hide before you use that broom…
But honestly, you didn’t need that kick… you’re a natural
But honestly, you didn’t need that kick… you’re a natural
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29th Sep 2024 3:29am
Re. The Banquet Of Dread
29th Sep 2024 3:27am
Brilliant poem, Shiloh. Best of luck in the competition. It kinda gave me Dr. Seuss vibes, except darker of course. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
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Re: Re. The Banquet Of Dread
29th Sep 2024 3:30am
Your support means a lot to me. I mean that. You are an extremely gifted writer.
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Re. The Banquet Of Dread
29th Sep 2024 11:08pm
Was on my way to join the feast,
Awakened the inner beast,
But had to let your party go,
A meadow of shadows,
Drew me with lust,
A appearing succubus,
With the bust for thrust,
Its only us, i must,
A fest, from the unrest,
Demonestress,
I decend in darkend chaotic mind,
Ill try reach your party next time<3
Awakened the inner beast,
But had to let your party go,
A meadow of shadows,
Drew me with lust,
A appearing succubus,
With the bust for thrust,
Its only us, i must,
A fest, from the unrest,
Demonestress,
I decend in darkend chaotic mind,
Ill try reach your party next time<3
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29th Sep 2024 11:35pm