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Their Story
Boardwalk cafe
Fingertips talk
Lips brush softly
Voices soft
Promises made
Dreams take flight
Sacred bond
Two hearts unite
Waves roll in
Salt scents the air
She quietly sighs
As he caresses her hair
Fingertips talk
Lips brush softly
Voices soft
Promises made
Dreams take flight
Sacred bond
Two hearts unite
Waves roll in
Salt scents the air
She quietly sighs
As he caresses her hair
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24th Sep 2024 2:41am
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24th Sep 2024 2:41am
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24th Sep 2024 2:50am
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24th Sep 2024 2:52am
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Wow, what a recovery! Well, just WOW really, haha. You sure bounce back real fast, don't you? This one made me smile. I was almost sayin' yeah, keep going, as I read each line & it didn't disappoint. 😊
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Re. Their Story
24th Sep 2024 4:01am
Dear H,
I loved the storyline in this piece. You could see a lifetime from young lovers to their 60th anniversary. Wonderful write. H🌷
I loved the storyline in this piece. You could see a lifetime from young lovers to their 60th anniversary. Wonderful write. H🌷
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Re. Their Story
24th Sep 2024 6:00am
You paint a picture of a couple romantically settling together over a cafe table.
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24th Sep 2024 11:29am
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