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Check-in
Checking in a void hotel
Room triple six
Your doppelganger hands you a key
Eyes transfixed
Ghostly tones whisper
"Just along the hall "
Light flickers, blood stains
Upon a blacken wall
You try to go asleep
Say a little prayer
In the corner, a silhouette
Rocking in a chair
Sweating, heart beating
Scratching at the door
Ghoulish laughter, evil spirits
Nail you to the floor
Room triple six
Your doppelganger hands you a key
Eyes transfixed
Ghostly tones whisper
"Just along the hall "
Light flickers, blood stains
Upon a blacken wall
You try to go asleep
Say a little prayer
In the corner, a silhouette
Rocking in a chair
Sweating, heart beating
Scratching at the door
Ghoulish laughter, evil spirits
Nail you to the floor
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Re. Check-in
22nd Sep 2024 9:55am
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- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
22nd Sep 2024 12:55pm
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Re. Check-in
22nd Sep 2024 1:42pm
At first I read "Room triple sex" 😂 Love the dark vibe of this one, well done.
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22nd Sep 2024 2:14pm
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22nd Sep 2024 3:34pm
You check in...question is...is there a check-out? Perfectly creepy, this!
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22nd Sep 2024 4:11pm
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22nd Sep 2024 4:36pm
Great Halloween poem- creepy with a touch of whimsy, due to the rhyming scheme. I enjoyed this.
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22nd Sep 2024 8:05pm
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Anonymous
22nd Sep 2024 5:30pm
I'm a horror fan. Enjoyed this and can picture it.
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22nd Sep 2024 8:06pm
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22nd Sep 2024 9:38pm
Maybe a chain of the "Bates Motel"...where is Norman? Great write. Hugs and love Oral
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23rd Sep 2024 3:47am
Phenomenal write, Pete. In the list it goes. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
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25th Sep 2024 11:35pm