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Cracked
Hindsight’s always in the rearview mirror
Chasing dreams into the great wide open
Where living fast can lead to dying young
And surviving the game leaves ya broken
Every single night spent painting the town
Against all odds there was no danger found
Sooner or later you’re bound to get caught
Ending up face down on fractured ground
There is no rewriting the ending on this one
That one decision that you can’t take back
Dirty choices made in a weakened moment
Is when all the fragile souls begin to crack
Chasing dreams into the great wide open
Where living fast can lead to dying young
And surviving the game leaves ya broken
Every single night spent painting the town
Against all odds there was no danger found
Sooner or later you’re bound to get caught
Ending up face down on fractured ground
There is no rewriting the ending on this one
That one decision that you can’t take back
Dirty choices made in a weakened moment
Is when all the fragile souls begin to crack
Published 20th Sep 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. Remember to be careful out there when it comes to dealing with other peoples souls. We're all fragile enough to crack, if the hurt is for real.
- Damian DeadLove
"That special moment lost in time
The one with the showroom shine
Well, I'm sorry babe, yes I'm sorry babe
But I feel that way all the time, ohh"
- David Lee Roth
- Damian DeadLove
"That special moment lost in time
The one with the showroom shine
Well, I'm sorry babe, yes I'm sorry babe
But I feel that way all the time, ohh"
- David Lee Roth
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20th Sep 2024 6:57am
21st Sep 2024 3:19am
I think we're all cracked a little in this life, Jimmy. Thanks for your kind words and continued support. Appreciate you.
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20th Sep 2024 8:58am
Superbly crafted Damian, the pitfalls of life, I'm hoping as we get older, we become wiser 🙃
21st Sep 2024 3:21am
So glad you liked the write. There are lots of pitfalls out there for sure. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Pete. Appreciate you.
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20th Sep 2024 10:10am
Great piece, Damian, I believe we all are a little fragile.
"There is no rewriting the ending on this one" > this line hit hard. If only we could rewrite our lives or at least a few pages, but then again: would it be our life? See, you made me ponder...
"There is no rewriting the ending on this one" > this line hit hard. If only we could rewrite our lives or at least a few pages, but then again: would it be our life? See, you made me ponder...
21st Sep 2024 3:26am
That's one of my favorite things to do, I love making people ponder. I'm glad you liked the write. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Duende. Appreciate you.
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20th Sep 2024 11:16am
Once it's starts it just gets worse and worse, leaves you really broken.
Hope you're ok man.
Hope you're ok man.
21st Sep 2024 3:28am
I'm alright, just pondering on the past, Ryan. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. Appreciate you.
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21st Sep 2024 3:48am
Great story, Shiloh. I do remember Adam Ant, and that song as well. And that's a nice comeback. You didn't miss much. Not that there wasn't any good times, or funny stories. They were aplenty. But becoming addicted?, I wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy. It's looking back and knowing what it cost you, that sticks with you. I'm not bitter though, going through it made me who I am. It's all just therapy every time I write. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. Appreciate you.
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20th Sep 2024 1:29pm
Beautiful sentiment, Damian. Rarely do some consider the consequences of their actions and how they will affect others.
I am constantly telling my grandson, now in high school, to be careful with young girl's hearts. His response, "Nana, I'm only 14". Good answer! Wait as long as possible!
I am constantly telling my grandson, now in high school, to be careful with young girl's hearts. His response, "Nana, I'm only 14". Good answer! Wait as long as possible!
21st Sep 2024 3:59am
It was a good answer. Not considering consequences, that's dangerous.That's very true, especially if you get alcohol involved. You add that into the equation and bad judgement on top of it, it's a Molotov cocktail for sure. I have a few regrets myself, I think it's kinda par for the course in life. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Tams. Appreciate you.
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