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The Dentist
Day 1
Mood: irritated
Song: Don't turn around-Ace of Base
Went to the dentist today. It wasn't Dr. Goodman, It was someone new. A woman, she smiled at me as I sat in the chair. She pulled out a scalpel and I Luna by her blue and pinnk hair. I thought I had killed her on Island Nothing. Vengeance burned in her eyes. I tried to run, but I kept slipping on toothpaste. Finally after struggling for some time, I made it out of the toothpaste. She was closer than I had thought. My only choice was to die or swim, and I couldn't swim. I leaped into the water. I choked and splashed, gulping air every chance I got. My mind started fading. I realised I was dying. Then something started pulling me deeper. I opened my eyes, they burned from the mouthwash. Everything smelled minty. He was leaning over me. I scowled at him.
After I wrote all that, Dr. Goodman called me. I got my teeth cleaned and went home.
Mood: irritated
Song: Don't turn around-Ace of Base
Went to the dentist today. It wasn't Dr. Goodman, It was someone new. A woman, she smiled at me as I sat in the chair. She pulled out a scalpel and I Luna by her blue and pinnk hair. I thought I had killed her on Island Nothing. Vengeance burned in her eyes. I tried to run, but I kept slipping on toothpaste. Finally after struggling for some time, I made it out of the toothpaste. She was closer than I had thought. My only choice was to die or swim, and I couldn't swim. I leaped into the water. I choked and splashed, gulping air every chance I got. My mind started fading. I realised I was dying. Then something started pulling me deeper. I opened my eyes, they burned from the mouthwash. Everything smelled minty. He was leaning over me. I scowled at him.
After I wrote all that, Dr. Goodman called me. I got my teeth cleaned and went home.
Published 15th May 2012
| Edited 16th May 2012
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15th May 2012 5:30pm
Nicely and complexly written. Is the first part, before "Dr. Goodman (interesting name, like a saviour sort)called you, a dream? Thanks for wtiting and sharing this.
Marcella1
Marcella1
15th May 2012 6:11pm
It was a dream or daydream, I like to play things out before they happen. Love my imagination.
15th May 2012 7:57pm
15th May 2012 8:11pm
