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Explosion Clouds
Looking at the explosion clouds.
There is a complete void of sound.
The September trees
are diminishing green,
in their lazy lean.
We are not just alive,
to satisfy hungers.
To examine bruised blunders.
Nature satisfies us too.
Bombs of peace in a sky cornflower blue.
There is a complete void of sound.
The September trees
are diminishing green,
in their lazy lean.
We are not just alive,
to satisfy hungers.
To examine bruised blunders.
Nature satisfies us too.
Bombs of peace in a sky cornflower blue.
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i love explosive clouds. That's what I stare at when lounging in my pool. Your the queen of poems regarding nature & beauty. Great work!
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12th Sep 2024 1:06pm
So would that make you the king of horror 😊
Thank you so much for always supporting me with lovely comments.
Nice you have a pool.
Thank you so much for always supporting me with lovely comments.
Nice you have a pool.
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12th Sep 2024 1:34pm
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12th Sep 2024 2:18pm
Maybe a hundred years from now I'll be remembered as a Frost or Thoreau, lol
Thank you so very much!
Thank you so very much!
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12th Sep 2024 1:56pm
What a stunning last line to an amazing piece. Love the idea of explosion clouds 💙
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12th Sep 2024 4:06pm
'' Bombs of peace in a sky cornflower blue ''
What a beautiful bowtie to an excellent write.
What a beautiful bowtie to an excellent write.
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13th Sep 2024 4:58am
Brilliantly written, Debbie. Wonderful imagery. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
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14th Sep 2024 12:11pm
I always envy nature, because its inhabitants seem so content with just being. You capture this spirit well.
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14th Sep 2024 1:36pm