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Two Takes
Two Takes
Observing now
two takes,
just side
by side,
like twins
who then
just
as might
take pose
slight off,
one up,
one down,
and I,
glancing
as it were
from side
to side,
and she,
angled first up
and then down,
and glancing right
then left,
alternating versions,
or one being
fully integrated
in her own way,
simply
taking it all
in,
and then simply
letting it
out.
Observing now
two takes,
just side
by side,
like twins
who then
just
as might
take pose
slight off,
one up,
one down,
and I,
glancing
as it were
from side
to side,
and she,
angled first up
and then down,
and glancing right
then left,
alternating versions,
or one being
fully integrated
in her own way,
simply
taking it all
in,
and then simply
letting it
out.
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