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homeless
the axe
ran on
the trees,
a storm
came
into
the lives
of the
birds...
ran on
the trees,
a storm
came
into
the lives
of the
birds...
Author's Note
the view outside my job place..the couple was resting on their love branch...
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Re. homeless
1st Sep 2024 7:35am
Lovely to see birds pair up on a branch as if keeping a date. From the poem, I wonder if the tree was being chopped down when they were on it.
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Re: Re. homeless
1st Sep 2024 7:38am
nope it was not being cut at that time... that is my thought only, What if the tree gets cut???
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1st Sep 2024 7:40am
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1st Sep 2024 11:45am
A raging river torrent came to my mind (global warming/environmental chaos) to cause the felling of that tree. Love can be stormy indeed but birds seem more successful when it comes to life partners.
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1st Sep 2024 12:57pm
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1st Sep 2024 1:24pm
Trees shouldn't be felled, of course but the raging river torrent could uproot them. 😊
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Re: Re. homeless
1st Sep 2024 4:02pm
oh my God!!!:) it is a great honor mam for me that you included my words in your RL entry.... thank you so much...
Re. homeless
2nd Sep 2024 3:17am
Phenomenal writing. I like this a lot. It's so relatable. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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2nd Sep 2024 6:20am
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2024 3:01pm
A lovely refuge for the little couple. Branch with a view
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