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murder
to shower
someone with
love and care
n then leave her /him
as a barren land....
shining her/his words
with your tongue
in the new moon
n then leaving her/him
in silence...
taking someone
to the field
of green emotions
n then burying her/him
in the deep pits of tests...
someone with
love and care
n then leave her /him
as a barren land....
shining her/his words
with your tongue
in the new moon
n then leaving her/him
in silence...
taking someone
to the field
of green emotions
n then burying her/him
in the deep pits of tests...
Published 31st Aug 2024
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31st Aug 2024 5:00am
31st Aug 2024 6:06am
yaay it's definitely a murder
you understood my poem perfectly, mary...THANKS SO MUCH for RL entry...
you understood my poem perfectly, mary...THANKS SO MUCH for RL entry...
31st Aug 2024 7:28am
'Loving and leaving' can feel like a murder to those on the 'left behind' side.
31st Aug 2024 8:37am
1st Sep 2024 11:31am
Relatable…. Lost love can feel that way on both sides … fine lines between love and hate/murder
Well done
Well done
1st Sep 2024 12:59pm
2nd Sep 2024 6:50am
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6th Sep 2024 00:15am
Killing me softly with your song. You also deserve orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
6th Sep 2024 3:29am
