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Red Rose
My red, red rose,
My heart beats uncontrollably.
It's hard for me to stay composed,
Waiting to show you all of me.
So I sit here watching sunrise,
Albeit slowly. It's shy, I surmise;
Or maybe cloudy,
Like your desire -
Takin' far too long to catch fire.
But I come to you with delicate care,
Spreading my petals like sweet perfume.
Watch as I flourish and never presume,
Just follow the scent that fills the room.
It follows a challenge my red red rose,
That our passion may grow and grow.
It needn't be a fragile thing,
To understand what love can bring.
My heart beats uncontrollably.
It's hard for me to stay composed,
Waiting to show you all of me.
So I sit here watching sunrise,
Albeit slowly. It's shy, I surmise;
Or maybe cloudy,
Like your desire -
Takin' far too long to catch fire.
But I come to you with delicate care,
Spreading my petals like sweet perfume.
Watch as I flourish and never presume,
Just follow the scent that fills the room.
It follows a challenge my red red rose,
That our passion may grow and grow.
It needn't be a fragile thing,
To understand what love can bring.
Author's Note
Collaboration with Billy Snagg
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25th Aug 2024 00:55am
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25th Aug 2024 1:10am
good evening beautiful Fia this so loving and giving of yourself for the one you love 💕
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25th Aug 2024 12:41pm
Red has always been a most versatile colour, as much a meaning of lust and desire as to danger and passion.
Xxx
Xxx
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25th Aug 2024 1:12pm
Yes. The multiple meaning of the color Red is wonderful to use in writing.
Thank you ❤️
Thank you ❤️
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