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Brevity

Don't view my brevity,
As simply curt.
Our love's longevity,
has been cut,
& I'm fleeing hurt.
But this path freeing,
Is being shut.
Written by Lamjhnsn1 (FREe African King)
Published
Author's Note
Not sure exactly what I did here. Just playing with words.
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