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That's My Day
Get up in the morning
The alarm goes off
Eyes open
To catch up to my mind
City has gone wild
Armed with light
There are times
I trudge right through
Perfect target
Snatch, cut, or shoot
Walk from the train
Back through the door
That's my day
The alarm goes off
Eyes open
To catch up to my mind
City has gone wild
Armed with light
There are times
I trudge right through
Perfect target
Snatch, cut, or shoot
Walk from the train
Back through the door
That's my day
Published 27th Jul 2024
Author's Note
Blackout poetry attempt. Taken from fianature8's poem, "My Morning"
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27th Jul 2024 3:17am
You got that from my long poem. Nice short version. Good luck. I really like this. Fia xoxo
27th Jul 2024 3:24am
Thanks so much for letting me borrow a poem. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your kind words and the RL. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
27th Jul 2024 5:38am
What an outstanding poem you created from Fia's piece.
To me it's a winner. Good luck in the comp, DL
To me it's a winner. Good luck in the comp, DL
27th Jul 2024 6:34am
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. Grateful for the RL. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
27th Jul 2024 6:19pm
28th Jul 2024 3:54am
