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The last unfolding venue
I favour absolution
But it divides thy weary head
To satisfy illusion
I’ll paint the words you’ve never said
Your lips are stained with envy
Your tears are spilled with rust
Your breath is long and winded
Cinders down to piling dust
Your soul is convoluted
Your Impatience is a sin
The measures that adjust thyself
Outstretched as it is thin
I value common thresholds
I’m never surging to the void
Never splayed out in continue
Never thoughtlessly deployed
I hold that chance will favour
The incredibly devout
But the last unfolding venue
Sings the praise without the clout
I shalt not be dishonest
I will not fade the truth
But you’re breeding the despotic
devoid of common couth
But it divides thy weary head
To satisfy illusion
I’ll paint the words you’ve never said
Your lips are stained with envy
Your tears are spilled with rust
Your breath is long and winded
Cinders down to piling dust
Your soul is convoluted
Your Impatience is a sin
The measures that adjust thyself
Outstretched as it is thin
I value common thresholds
I’m never surging to the void
Never splayed out in continue
Never thoughtlessly deployed
I hold that chance will favour
The incredibly devout
But the last unfolding venue
Sings the praise without the clout
I shalt not be dishonest
I will not fade the truth
But you’re breeding the despotic
devoid of common couth
Published 26th Jul 2024
| Edited 30th Oct 2024
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27th Jul 2024 1:05pm
Your poetry takes me to some poetic dimensions, with its rhyme and even its hidden meanings..
its is always good to unfold oneself and say it straight in the face to get things cleared.
Thanks for sharing. Hamid
its is always good to unfold oneself and say it straight in the face to get things cleared.
Thanks for sharing. Hamid
27th Jul 2024 1:16pm
Thanks again for the read. I’m a deep thinker and I like others to dig deep. There are so many levels to consciousness and thought and I’m determined to reach all of them. Enjoy your day :)
We reach many layers of consciousness thru deep thinking,
cogitating, philosophy the real existence, and mystify the concrete
to reach the abstract, its like being a child who transcends the notion
pf the toys he plays with into some other abstract existence..
Thinking is always good to reach a higher level of rapturous enlightenment....
cogitating, philosophy the real existence, and mystify the concrete
to reach the abstract, its like being a child who transcends the notion
pf the toys he plays with into some other abstract existence..
Thinking is always good to reach a higher level of rapturous enlightenment....
27th Jul 2024 1:26pm
27th Jul 2024 1:33pm
In nowhere, just stay silent for while, in solitude with your ownself,
you dont need any other spiritual rituals, go deep in thinking,
and you will be there where you never was,
or you can count on some kind of music, like the one on my avatar.
its called panhand music, vibrations that hit the nerves of conscience and mind, and even brain....
you dont need any other spiritual rituals, go deep in thinking,
and you will be there where you never was,
or you can count on some kind of music, like the one on my avatar.
its called panhand music, vibrations that hit the nerves of conscience and mind, and even brain....
27th Jul 2024 1:48pm
I’m intrigued. I do value meditation using frequencies. There’s something magical about them. Takes you to a different place. And I love nature so whenever I can sit and take it all in, I’m there. Give me both, I’m refreshed.
27th Jul 2024 1:53pm
Im a nature lover and hiker all the time when not busy at home,
morning walks take me straight to mountains and forests wheer i
spend a great time watching and meditating on everything whatever.and scribble some forewords and lines of my poetry,
i think is real and true though, its not a very fine English.
compared to so many writers here...Nature and music are the most
inspiring duos that help forge a good mind..
morning walks take me straight to mountains and forests wheer i
spend a great time watching and meditating on everything whatever.and scribble some forewords and lines of my poetry,
i think is real and true though, its not a very fine English.
compared to so many writers here...Nature and music are the most
inspiring duos that help forge a good mind..
27th Jul 2024 3:31pm
I think we’re a lot alike. I want to have a long retort to this but I’m at work. We’ll chat later :)
27th Jul 2024 3:42pm
I really like this Stanza
"Your lips are stained with envy
Your tears are spilled with rust
Your breath is long and winded
Cinders down to piling dust"
You can feel the distain in this. Fia xoxo
"Your lips are stained with envy
Your tears are spilled with rust
Your breath is long and winded
Cinders down to piling dust"
You can feel the distain in this. Fia xoxo
28th Jul 2024 1:04am
