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Whiplash

Up,
Down,
Hot,
Cold,
Hell yes,
Fuck no.

I can’t keep up.
Shit is going fast.
Some time it’s real good,
others it’s real bad.

Holding onto my spinning head,
I think I’m giving myself whiplash.
I need some water,
and maybe several seats.
I can’t eat,
I can’t think,
hell, I can’t even sleep.

My mind is going ninety— to nothing.
I’m gonna crash and burn.
Yet, like a moth to a flame..
Here I am again. You’d think I’d have learned.

Fuck yes
Hell no
Down
Up
Hot
Cold

I don’t know, but the shit is getting old..


- Poetic Gawdess
Written by poetic_gawdess
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Something conjured up in the midnight hour…due to an overactive brain and just enough willpower to fight it….
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