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Again
I came
I sat on the same spot
I waited for you
To look at you
While you look at her
You did not come
I will come again tomorrow.
I sat on the same spot
I waited for you
To look at you
While you look at her
You did not come
I will come again tomorrow.
Published 15th Jul 2024
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Dear A,
I liked the sense of quiet stalker, noir mystery in this piece. The under current of loneliness is palpable. Your economy of words is a complete story and very difficult to do. Excellent writing. H🌷
I liked the sense of quiet stalker, noir mystery in this piece. The under current of loneliness is palpable. Your economy of words is a complete story and very difficult to do. Excellent writing. H🌷
16th Jul 2024 9:07am
15th Jul 2024 11:22pm
Interesting, I didn’t really see it like Honoria. I saw it more like a cheating husband.
I really felt this. Thank you for sharing.
Zazzles 👍🏻
I really felt this. Thank you for sharing.
Zazzles 👍🏻
16th Jul 2024 9:08am
It is an attractive silhouette in the city. Thank you for stopping by and reading.
17th Jul 2024 3:16am
17th Jul 2024 11:25am
