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Squeezed Out Eventually (Another Take)
A poem's sometimes like a bunged-up gut
when constipation's gripped it like a vice.
The situation's thick and grim, not nice,
the door of our creative arsehole shut,
the poem jammed inside our mental butt.
We try the ways we know to make it move:
a walk – the writer’s prunes – does not improve
our plight, the poem doesn't budge a bit
and even if it did it would be shit.
We're not tonight in that poetic groove.
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Published 10th Jul 2024
Author's Note
Revisiting a familiar theme 💩💩💩
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10th Jul 2024 4:05pm
11th Jul 2024 6:10pm
10th Jul 2024 6:36pm
That's when ya gotta go for a walk and work it through with gravity and pelvic action.
Poetry as literary deuce: an apt metaphor so much of the time, but you might not want to flush this one:)
Poetry as literary deuce: an apt metaphor so much of the time, but you might not want to flush this one:)
11th Jul 2024 6:11pm
10th Jul 2024 11:00pm
Dear AJ,
Well, this is one way of looking at writers block. 😂
It seems you may have loosed the grip on this backup with this poem. I enjoyed your perspective. I hope things will start to flow more smoothly. 😉
H🌷
Well, this is one way of looking at writers block. 😂
It seems you may have loosed the grip on this backup with this poem. I enjoyed your perspective. I hope things will start to flow more smoothly. 😉
H🌷
11th Jul 2024 6:18pm
Ha! Thanks, Honoria. 🙃
My consumption of prunes has drastically increased 💩
Much love 💐💩💐
My consumption of prunes has drastically increased 💩
Much love 💐💩💐
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2024 3:45pm
10th Jul 2024 11:48pm
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11th Jul 2024 6:16pm
5th Oct 2024 12:25pm
I totally understand this feeling, mate! Been there a few times myself. Sometimes I'll rejig it all just to realise it was better before, lol. 🙄🤣
5th Oct 2024 6:22pm
