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Mr Snake
Bite my face
Grab my neck.
Squeeze me and tease me.
Break my ribs.
Watch me close.
Still camouflaged
A toxic dose.
Of love and lust.
Hold me tight.
Don't let me go.
The grass is tall.
No one will know.
Keep me still.
I feel all of you.
Crushing me.
No need to chew.
Open wide
And let me in.
Deep inside
The greatest sin.
Silently,
Without a trace.
Disappear.
Just like a snake.
Grab my neck.
Squeeze me and tease me.
Break my ribs.
Watch me close.
Still camouflaged
A toxic dose.
Of love and lust.
Hold me tight.
Don't let me go.
The grass is tall.
No one will know.
Keep me still.
I feel all of you.
Crushing me.
No need to chew.
Open wide
And let me in.
Deep inside
The greatest sin.
Silently,
Without a trace.
Disappear.
Just like a snake.
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Re. Mr Snake
3rd Jul 2024 3:06pm
BRAVO. The rhyme and content caused a yes from Mr Snake...keeping it real and wanting...
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3rd Jul 2024 3:14pm
Re. Mr Snake
3rd Jul 2024 3:10pm
This really good. I'm afraid of snakes, except my own. Rock on ASD
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3rd Jul 2024 3:15pm
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3rd Jul 2024 4:40pm
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Re. Mr Snake
7th Jul 2024 5:09pm
Had me thinking you are the mistress in a "hidden" relation (tall grass). And Mr Snake is treating you like his side girl slithering back to their partner once the carnal deed is done.
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8th Jul 2024 2:30am
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2024 4:18pm
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