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Paradise Is Luving You

"I'm proud of who you are and love you very much because of it." 
 
how can I say in ink how you make me feel when you say this 
your words to me bring tears down my cheeks
cause I don't always understand why you luv me so
 
could it be the luv we share is so rare
so sacred even heaven can't imagine it
Angel's tears appear as misty rain admiring our luv 
 
will never forget the day I truly felt Gods blessing and mercy 
when He looked down upon my soul with such compassion 
His will was done with just a sigh our paths crossed in life 
 
I've never been the same inside or out since 
your sweet smile shines thru my happy soul
luv you always give makes my heart feel so peaceful
 
thank you my luv for saying ~ "Hello!"
that one simple word changed this broken soul 
life is a beautiful paradise experiencing luving you 
 
 
 
Copyright©2024Flowergirl
Written by flowergirl
Published | Edited 4th Jul 2024
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